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Jband1

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Wow amazing, this is very good, very descriptive, and another thing better than mine. Yet I say that a lot so

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05-Apr-2007 14:10:07

Roshinda

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Thank you Jband

Keep in mind I'm 22. When I was the age of most people on the forum, I wasn't nearly as good as most of you are.

06-Apr-2007 00:01:20

[#O4EM1GWQQ]

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Oo. Nice.

06-Apr-2007 00:03:00

Roshinda

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Thanks Zepp. That comment was a bit short, but I'll take it

lol

06-Apr-2007 00:53:49

[#G4BKCWEKS]

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Nice job, I really enjoyed what you have so far! I would like to point out a couple of spelling errors, nothing much.
"My village was rather isolated, high up on the mountain as it was, an it was rare that we would get visitors"
An should be and
"Dolkor, the Chiefitan"
Chiefitan should be Chieftain
"there were about a dozen travellers, that I could see."
Travellers should be travelers.
Other than that, there were no problems that I could spot, and it's very well written, great job!

06-Apr-2007 01:06:19

Roshinda

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Thanks Imposs.
Chiefitan (see I did it again) has always been hard for me to spell. Funny my spell checker didn't pick up it or travellers though.

06-Apr-2007 01:10:59

YuriaTrost

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I love this story!

06-Apr-2007 01:12:40

[#G4BKCWEKS]

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Np, and yeah, that's rather strange.

06-Apr-2007 01:12:49

[#3ZR6GFXIN]

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I like the whole moutain girl feel to it.Even though most of you dont know me, im an up coming thread writer.ANYWAY GOOD JOB.

06-Apr-2007 01:16:26 - Last edited on 06-Apr-2007 01:17:05 by [#3ZR6GFXIN]

Roshinda

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Thanks Lil and Mc.

Gah I hate this spell checker. Why must it always switch back to US? I don't want US spellings. It won't let me permanently change it. I change it to Canadian and the words are accepted, then it gets to a word that is wrong, and it changes back to US, and then the words that were spelled right in Canadian are wrong again.

EDIT: US spell check changes travellers to travelers, as you pointed out. Canadian spell check doesn't like travelers and has no suggestions.

06-Apr-2007 01:18:55 - Last edited on 06-Apr-2007 01:20:40 by Roshinda

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