Heads up: This short story is only three pages long.
Note from the Author: Honestly, before now, I have never let anyone read my writing. (So who better than complete strangers!) But I have become sick of seeing everything zombify on my computer’s Microsoft Word. So I am mainly posting my work to receive feedback from an audience. I do love writing, and I hereby promise I will not go into depression if you criticize my writing. If you notice a mistake, grammatical or whatever, it would be awesome if you informed me.
I realize I am only a beginner, and to deepen my skills I need advice or comments. But if you plan to criticize, please remain respectful and precise, or otherwise a mod will eat your post. =)
This is only a sample of my work, so enjoy!
Fan comments:
#1 Almost Lucky: "Great story! I was completely caught up into the story! Epic story indeed."
#2 Ghost 7-6: "Good plot, a few holes...Etc.,etc. You've got potential."
#3 Lambi81: "Very nice, it's hard to find a story that never makes you bored, at least once, but you did that. Very well done."
#4 Nytestryke24: "A very well written story that I hope to see more of!"
#5 SantaIzEpic: "Beautiful writing. I really got sucked into the story. Excellent probably the best writing I've seen on the forums."
#6 M O L 3: "Amazing story"
#7 Admirable Jo: “Very Nice! This is a well written story!”
#8 Chillable: "Excellent story. Keep it up!"
#9 Shawn 55: "Great Story, thumbs up!"
#10 Lilith De: "A very well written story. One that held my attention and breath. it was well thought out, even for a shorty"
#11 The Level: "This is great writing!"
#12 Pupppy 11: "Great story! Keep it up!"
#13 Simbahal: Nice story
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Note from the Author: Honestly, before now, I have never let anyone read my writing. (So who better than complete strangers!) But I have become sick of seeing everything zombify on my computer’s Microsoft Word. So I am mainly posting my work to receive feedback from an audience. I do love writing, and I hereby promise I will not go into depression if you criticize my writing. If you notice a mistake, grammatical or whatever, it would be awesome if you informed me.
I realize I am only a beginner, and to deepen my skills I need advice or comments. But if you plan to criticize, please remain respectful and precise, or otherwise a mod will eat your post. =)
This is only a sample of my work, so enjoy!
Fan comments:
#1 Almost Lucky: "Great story! I was completely caught up into the story! Epic story indeed."
#2 Ghost 7-6: "Good plot, a few holes...Etc.,etc. You've got potential."
#3 Lambi81: "Very nice, it's hard to find a story that never makes you bored, at least once, but you did that. Very well done."
#4 Nytestryke24: "A very well written story that I hope to see more of!"
#5 SantaIzEpic: "Beautiful writing. I really got sucked into the story. Excellent probably the best writing I've seen on the forums."
#6 M O L 3: "Amazing story"
#7 Admirable Jo: “Very Nice! This is a well written story!”
#8 Chillable: "Excellent story. Keep it up!"
#9 Shawn 55: "Great Story, thumbs up!"
#10 Lilith De: "A very well written story. One that held my attention and breath. it was well thought out, even for a shorty"
#11 The Level: "This is great writing!"
#12 Pupppy 11: "Great story! Keep it up!"
#13 Simbahal: Nice story
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23-Nov-2010 00:51:53 - Last edited on 19-Aug-2013 19:45:01 by Mttimeo