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I'm going to be reading this now. So from the start, let's do my Draken's reading method.
Where I make banal comments as I read.
Lol epic doubleteam. Poor solider had no chance.
Pffft Herman stands no chance. Elephant memory Sergent is cool tho'.
Ryan be losing his skillz. Should go level up, get those rusty gears oiled.
Terri could totally take down the other four there
Those two guys are living out of sync. That'll bite them sooner or later.
Oh man, they talked the scouts into their group? That's spectacular.
"I'm here" Jack's voice came abruptly from behind Oliver, now faintly visible from the fire's light. "And I don not appreciate you talking about me behind my back, Ryan."
typo.
Stealer could also solo a large number of people.
So that means I'm caught up now. I liked this. Good read, not heavy, but enjoyable. You're still setting up the plot at the moment, so I can't really comment further. Keep at it and I'll keep reading.
Where I make banal comments as I read.
Lol epic doubleteam. Poor solider had no chance.
Pffft Herman stands no chance. Elephant memory Sergent is cool tho'.
Ryan be losing his skillz. Should go level up, get those rusty gears oiled.
Terri could totally take down the other four there
Those two guys are living out of sync. That'll bite them sooner or later.
Oh man, they talked the scouts into their group? That's spectacular.
"I'm here" Jack's voice came abruptly from behind Oliver, now faintly visible from the fire's light. "And I don not appreciate you talking about me behind my back, Ryan."
typo.
Stealer could also solo a large number of people.
So that means I'm caught up now. I liked this. Good read, not heavy, but enjoyable. You're still setting up the plot at the moment, so I can't really comment further. Keep at it and I'll keep reading.
16-Jan-2010 08:37:59
*finally comes to thread* Uhhh, do I still get first post? =/
Haven't read story yet XD
AND WHY ARE YOU MAKING IT ABOUT CRIME AKA THIEVING? LET'S TRY NOT TO REMEMBER BLUE OKAY?
Edit: And damnit I hate this name, I want my old one back.
Haven't read story yet XD
AND WHY ARE YOU MAKING IT ABOUT CRIME AKA THIEVING? LET'S TRY NOT TO REMEMBER BLUE OKAY?
Edit: And damnit I hate this name, I want my old one back.
13-Feb-2010 15:43:09 - Last edited on 13-Feb-2010 15:43:49 by Wave Slayer
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