RuneScape Forum Archive | Life of Crime

Ghastrage718

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Hey Sira! I like the beginnings of this new story. It is well described and I am beginnning to get a feel of what the characters are like.

05-Dec-2009 09:51:53

I AM FRODO

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Erm, you're last quotations should have commas before them. I forgot about that after reading your story on the SD.

And on one of the last sentences of chapter one, you misused the forms of "two, too, and to".

05-Dec-2009 14:39:12

Sirapyro

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Hey James, and thanks. =)

Thanks for pointing those mistakes out for me, Frodo.

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05-Dec-2009 17:36:34

I AM FRODO

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no problem, you should add some more. I've got no inspiration to write, so mayhaps you could help?

05-Dec-2009 17:46:44

Sirapyro

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I might write some more later today. And as for helping to inspire you, I only have this one piece of advise: start.

I have been without inspiration for a long time, but I find once I start to write I get more ideas to build on and it becomes easier.

I, unfortunately, am very slow with ideas, so I am not the best person to ask for these kinds of things. =( Join The Questing Clan of RuneScape! !

05-Dec-2009 18:01:36