Thank you very much! Been forever since this old story got a new reader. It's quite old so I'm unsurprised that there are grammatical errors on it.
What is the "best story" on the forum, by the way? You've left me curious...
Well, your readership is always appreciated, as are your comments, hopefully you'll enjoy the rest as I know that I was improving as I wrote it, so it should only get better as you go through.
16-Feb-2011 22:17:35