NovelistElly,
Thank you for reading my little note.
Unfortunately I think I may have offended when I did not mean to.
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"I'm quite impressed with your analysis of one of my earlier passages. ... my writing from long ago ... are not up to the current standards I have set for myself....As for the mistakes..."
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I see no fault in the writing standard and really intended no analysis. As for "mistakes" I think you misinterpret due to my clumsy attempts to help.
I sought only to lend a hand if it were of interest to you.
If I have offended I beg your pardon.
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"...I wrote this under the impression that in whatever period Runescape is set modern medical practice is not in place...."
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This might seem a logical time to use magic to solve the issues here presented but I would respectfully disagree with the "need". The instruments and techniques I mentioned were in common use long before Rome's legions set out for conquest.
Still I think I see your point in not bothering the reader with such "trivia".
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"The pain that you described was completely numbed by magic, and as for the arrow being "intact" I was merely saying that it was in one piece."
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I yield to your art...and await more.
It's really nice.
A small issue would be that if certain muscles in this region were cut in the manner described it might prove impossible to raise one's head, regardless of the pain.
We'll assume not.
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"... I will leave it as it is. I am planning to edit the story eventually,.."
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Don't edit out the "good stuff"!
Sorry, sounding too "pretentious" even for my own tastes.
Rest easy...and picture me smiling as a friend in the offering.
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"I think we should just leave them in the dark, as an act of kindness I think...."
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I love it!
Very "Thomas Harris".
The darkness may be a blessing
when magic is in the air
and so we'll leave those drenched dressings
in the surgeon's tender care.
Did I mention I love the story?
Thank you for reading my little note.
Unfortunately I think I may have offended when I did not mean to.
--+--
"I'm quite impressed with your analysis of one of my earlier passages. ... my writing from long ago ... are not up to the current standards I have set for myself....As for the mistakes..."
--+--
I see no fault in the writing standard and really intended no analysis. As for "mistakes" I think you misinterpret due to my clumsy attempts to help.
I sought only to lend a hand if it were of interest to you.
If I have offended I beg your pardon.
--+--
"...I wrote this under the impression that in whatever period Runescape is set modern medical practice is not in place...."
--+--
This might seem a logical time to use magic to solve the issues here presented but I would respectfully disagree with the "need". The instruments and techniques I mentioned were in common use long before Rome's legions set out for conquest.
Still I think I see your point in not bothering the reader with such "trivia".
--+--
"The pain that you described was completely numbed by magic, and as for the arrow being "intact" I was merely saying that it was in one piece."
--+--
I yield to your art...and await more.
It's really nice.
A small issue would be that if certain muscles in this region were cut in the manner described it might prove impossible to raise one's head, regardless of the pain.
We'll assume not.
--+--
"... I will leave it as it is. I am planning to edit the story eventually,.."
--+--
Don't edit out the "good stuff"!
Sorry, sounding too "pretentious" even for my own tastes.
Rest easy...and picture me smiling as a friend in the offering.
--+--
"I think we should just leave them in the dark, as an act of kindness I think...."
--+--
I love it!
Very "Thomas Harris".
The darkness may be a blessing
when magic is in the air
and so we'll leave those drenched dressings
in the surgeon's tender care.
Did I mention I love the story?
We must all learn to embrace our own inner newbishness
20-Dec-2009 16:12:43 - Last edited on 20-Dec-2009 22:35:23 by Resoun
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