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16-Dec-2009 16:05:03
Bump.
~Caydock
~Caydock
18-Dec-2009 14:51:58
Resoun,
Firstly, I'm going to take an educated guess here and say that you are either very involved in medical pracitce, or you are extremely well versed in it. Regardless, I'm quite impressed with your analysis of one of my earlier passages. I can agree that my writing from long ago--that passage would be dated by a year I believe--are not up to the current standards I have set for myself.
As for the mistakes, and I do trust your judgment in the matter, I wrote this under the impression that in whatever period Runescape is set modern medical practice is not in place. The pain that you described was completely numbed by magic, and as for the arrow being "intact" I was merely saying that it was in one piece.
Regardless, I do very much appreciate your comments and, while I appreciate the knowledge you have provided to me, I will leave it as it is. I am planning to edit the story eventually, to sort out the errors, but until then I will be content knowing that not everyone is as knowlegable in the field of medicine, else I would have every reader being just as informed as you.
I think we should just leave them in the dark, as an act of kindness I think.
Much Appreciated,
Elly
Firstly, I'm going to take an educated guess here and say that you are either very involved in medical pracitce, or you are extremely well versed in it. Regardless, I'm quite impressed with your analysis of one of my earlier passages. I can agree that my writing from long ago--that passage would be dated by a year I believe--are not up to the current standards I have set for myself.
As for the mistakes, and I do trust your judgment in the matter, I wrote this under the impression that in whatever period Runescape is set modern medical practice is not in place. The pain that you described was completely numbed by magic, and as for the arrow being "intact" I was merely saying that it was in one piece.
Regardless, I do very much appreciate your comments and, while I appreciate the knowledge you have provided to me, I will leave it as it is. I am planning to edit the story eventually, to sort out the errors, but until then I will be content knowing that not everyone is as knowlegable in the field of medicine, else I would have every reader being just as informed as you.
I think we should just leave them in the dark, as an act of kindness I think.
Much Appreciated,
Elly
19-Dec-2009 18:44:25
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