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Cicobe1

Cicobe1

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So! It's time for what I thought of the story. :O
Elly, the story was phenomenal, and I expected no less out of you. It was easily one of the best stories I've ever read on the forums, and was simply spectacular. The detail, plot, and storyline were all just incredible, and somehow you managed to tie in romance with it brilliantly, which I'd never thought possible, considering I've never seen you write romance. It was awesome, from beginning, middle, to end, and I enjoyed every minute of it. The only thing I'd comment on is the loads of grammatical errors throughout the piece. Besides that, it was easily one of the top 10 stories I've ever read on the forums.
Best of luck with your next piece! :)

16-Sep-2009 01:01:30 - Last edited on 17-Sep-2009 23:47:38 by Cicobe1

NovelistElly

NovelistElly

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ATTENTION STORIES FORUM!
The Word presents its Halloween holiday event, please join us for spooks, stories, and fun!
×Summary×
World: 1
Time: 5:30 PM EST (GMT -5) we start walking, if you are not there and ready at 5:30 you can catch up to us later.
Story Contest Theme: Halloween Story
Word Limit: 200
Date: Saturday, October 31
Bring a costume for your written piece! Wear your Guard costume!
Route: We will depart from White Knight castle in Falador, follow the road into Varrock, to the town center, turn south and follow the path into Lumbridge Castle Courtyard, from there we will walk out and down the dirt path to Draynor, and then finally in to Draynor Manor. You can bank for your costume in Draynor. You will be following me, Elementsky21.
×The Costume×
Change Clothes in Varrock to (via Thelissa, price 1k):
-Plain Trousers: Dark Grey
-Plain Top: Dark Grey
-Thin Sleeves: Dark Grey
Hairstyle: Does not matter, no beards though.
Items:
-Bronze Med Helm
-Steel Chainbody
-Bronze Sword (NOT a longsword) or Bronze Battle Axe
-Steel Sq Shield
-Leather Boots
For maximum effect follow these instructions to the letter. No other items would be best if you want to come (other than in your inventory, you can carry things for your performance and bank for other stuff in Draynor).
All the guards are guys, for any of the ladies (or people with feminine characters) wishing to join us you are welcome to keep your character female, but technically all guards are male. If you want change to males via the Makeover Mage outside Falador. I don't mind either way, just pointing it out.
If you can't find the money then just ask me, I will be willing to supply:
-5k for those who need to change clothes and get the items
-10-15k for those who need to change clothes, get the items, and change their character.
If you have money and you ask me for some...you better hope I'm in costume and only have a bronze sword. I don't like beggars.
Thanks Paccy!
*Elly

19-Sep-2009 21:39:19

Englishkid62

Englishkid62

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*has finished reading, as promised*
~Typo on first sentence in Chapter 27?
'Speaking of Adam, he and Rachel had slept right next to each other, leaving John to sleep a few feet away, dozing off with an odd and unintentional separation between himself and the group.'
~English thinks: Eww...
*Really likes Chapter 28.
'His conquest over Gielinor was not nearly as interesting with his minions doing so much of the work'
~English giggles.
'Now, now, this won’t do at all. Adam and I are going to have a private conversation. You two, buzz off'
~English giggles again.
What do I think of it? A unique and fascinating tale. Both gripping and satisfying. I just hope that one day you'll know what a good writer you really are.

24-Sep-2009 13:04:35 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2009 13:33:59 by Englishkid62

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