Well, this was a surprise, maybe there is a glimmer of hope for my project after all.
After reading the first post, I can say the setting so far is quite imaginative. The prospect of having to traverse floating islands via rope and bridges is pretty scary, you sure do not want to fall. I also envisioned vines and similar plants growing from island to island.
The two unoriginal aspects are the floating islands and the hidden evil race, but no big deal, this is a project for freedom and development after all.
Ah, Simon’s father fell down into the never-ending abyss. I can see how the inhabitants have to be peaceful, it’d be difficult to fight in such, uh, “terrain.” Gravity does offer a complicated picture to imagine, but it does add to the otherworldly feel already introduced.
The invaders have a big advantage in their conquest, forcing Simon to do his best to deal with the problem.
Overall, your entry has impressive features, and I am glad you posted it. We’ll just have to wait and see what happens. If Seph could submit his own stuff, and perhaps another person to do likewise, we’d be able to get this thread going.
This weekend, I’ll try to add a few events and extra stuff on the front page, to provide a feel as to how the thread functions.
22-Mar-2014 05:02:32
