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Poller5
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Some time later the meeting adjourned without reaching a conclusion. All the Kings were frustrated and the atmosphere in the fortress was highly charged. Gul'dan walked alone, mulling things over in his mind. After spending around an hour walking around the city without being able to come to any conclusions on what would happen.

While doing this he realized it would be for them to come to an agreement over a method of attack, for while it was hard for him to do it in his mind, it would be even harder for a over half a dozen men to come to an agreement together. Changing his pace, he went off to see how Maly*tryx and the acolyte from the temple were faring.

14-Jun-2007 18:55:32 - Last edited on 15-Jun-2007 19:31:46 by Poller5

Poller5
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Well (as I stated in the intro) the title has very little to do with the story, when I first planned it was going to be a short story involving a great battle in a setting mirroring that in Castle Wars, and the battlefield is somewhat representative of Castle Wars now, but this has grown beyond my conceptualization and so is somewhat irrelevant to the title.

14-Jun-2007 20:29:20

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Nice (as ever); but I'm not quite sure what happened to the first post of that chapter. It has loads of big jumps in mid-sentence... O_o .

Oh, and you'd probably wanna bung in more action some time soon. I'm hungry for blood...

Did I just say blood? I mean, erm, battle? :P

And those chimps sound a bit expensive. Not sure how the allowance would cope XD.

15-Jun-2007 17:10:29

Poller5
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I'm sure your hunger for blood, err, battle, will soon be sated, as the major battle sequence is about to begin. And as for the first post being a bit hard to follow, the whole part with Zamorack wasn't meant to be understood, as Zamorack is merely thinking out loud, and I didn't want to give too much away (though I'm sure I can think a few people who can guess what will happen).

15-Jun-2007 17:14:51

Poller5
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Paragraphs have spaces in between them, atch out for the *** thing, which indicates a change of place or time within the chapter.

Oh, umm, oops. Fixed that now.

15-Jun-2007 17:29:32 - Last edited on 15-Jun-2007 17:33:35 by Poller5

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