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Silver Snake

Silver Snake

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I have read about 50 posts now. Okay, the review.

Plot: 28/30. So far, it is very original. Especially how the 'good guys' get killed as well

Character description: 17/25 some of your characters lack desciption, I didn't quite get the mental picture.

Grammar: 14/15, the only things I could find were 'Tomatoe' (Unless americans spell it like that) and 'unamanious' should be unanimous.

Word choice: 14/15 some good similes and metaphors here and there

Flow 11/15 a bit to jumpy really. You should try to descibe what happens in their journeys more

Overall interestingness: 37/40 It was a very interestion story overall

Fun I had reading it: 18/20, I completely forgot how long it was, because it was so exciting.

Tilt (can go up or down): +5

Total: 124/160. A lot better than this score says though.

24-Sep-2007 21:40:52 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2007 22:32:25 by Silver Snake

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