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Chrisn44

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What about Kyle?! I don't like it when u take out Kyle from the story. It's like he just dissapears in the story.


Anyways, I leave soon, so I hope this story goes well when I'm traveling.


And omg i just got d legs!

08-Jun-2007 13:53:04 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2007 14:30:27 by Chrisn44

Chrisn44

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If u don't mind I"m going to add a very small part:


Hyro: Blackriku, you should make the choice now to...
Kyle: Marry Jin or not.
Hyro: Right.

Blackriku looks at Jin

Blackriku: I'm.....not sure.







If u don't like it, srry. I just thought it would be a good part to add.

08-Jun-2007 14:01:04

Glow250

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Hyro: Blackriku, you should make the choice now to...
Kyle: Marry Jin or not.
Hyro: Right.

Blackriku looks at Jin

Blackriku: I'm.....not sure.

Glow walks into the room, holding the bow that Zotiac gave to Riku.

Glow: Hmm nice bow. Infact, it does look like it has got someone's soul trapped in it.

Riku: Give it back-

Glow: And did I mention that it could explode at any second?

The house explodes as if on cue; and all that is left is a pile of rubble. But who survived?

This would be quite good if you put it in a chapter. This is just my opinon of course.

08-Jun-2007 18:39:37

Hex the wolf

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Glow walks into the room, holding the bow that Zotiac gave to Riku.

Glow: Hmm nice bow. Infact, it does look like it has got someone's soul trapped in it.

Riku: Give it back-

Glow: And did I mention that it could explode at any second?

Nhoj: you fool! (cast heal group)

(house explodes)

Nhoj: (strugles to stay awake then falls to the floor)

i hopefully live but if glow did that i would react this way

It would be a sad fate to die to glow.. :|

08-Jun-2007 20:22:36

Hyro Silver

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Lol btw Chris sorry I just wanted to make it seem like Kyle was still fighting his evil brother Ethan who is not possesed but just plain evil... and weird... and a noob... tell him i said that lol jk :P Ok and also Hyro's in the past chris Ill wright right now

08-Jun-2007 22:03:26

Hyro Silver

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Chapter 69 -Back to the Future Part III-

"I love changing the future." Hyro exclaimed to himself hapily.

He lays down on the ground on this nice hot sunny day and smiles. He looks up into the sky and starts to dream about the shapes of the clouds. Hyro had no care anymore, nothing to worry about. Everything was right again.

Now if this was true then this would be the end of the story... but Light or Darkness is a twisting evil story that will end when we're all 60... or 61...

Hyro smiled then layed on the rocky gronud. He flinched when a spiky rock stuck into his back. He took it out and looked at the sky. It was dark and threatening to rain. Hyro was miserable now... He decided to look into the future again. He swated a fly near the sphere and picked it up.

"!"

He looked into the future and flys had invaded the earth!!! Was it the fly that he killed? Bah I hate this past present future stuff... He looked at the fly and healed it before it died. He looked into the future again and saw Kyle, Nhoj, Jin, and Blackriku, and a very invisable Chris crouched there. He could barely make out what they were saying but what he did hear was important.

"We need Hyro..."

Hyro smiled and took out a peice of paper. He looked into the sphere and wrote another messege.

-Future... or Present-

"I hope Hyro is ok... By the messege he sent it looks like he's bored." said Nhoj.
"He'll be ok, I know Hyro like the back of my hand!" said Kyle.
"I- I need him..." Blackriku whispered.

"Letter for a guy named Blackriku!"

"That'll be me."
"Here ya go, 5$ please."
"Take it."

Blackriku opened the parchment. He sat there for a moment and got up.

"We have to go to where everyone is."
"Why so sudden?"
"Hyro's introuble."
"How so...?"
"He's afraid he might change the future..."

Everyone gasped :*

08-Jun-2007 22:13:19 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2007 22:13:55 by Hyro Silver

Hyro Silver

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-Past-

"YOU THERE! YES YOU THE OLD GUY BY THE DRAGON!"

Hyro looked lazily towards the mysterious voices.

"Yes soldiers?"
"You look a lot like Hyro."
"I'm sorry but who is this man?"
"I'm sorry, you don't act like him..."
"No forgive me if I look like this dashing man."
"No problem, Be careful!"
"Thank you."

Hyro decided to get out of there. He flew to a nearby cave high in the mountain. He stopped infront and went inside with a lit torch. He heard some noises further down. He went closer and saw a tenn boy laying there on the ground.

"What's the matter boy?" asked Hyro curiously.
"Leave me you don't want to be here at night!"
"Boy, I can handle werewolves."
"Ho- How do you know I'm a werewolf?"
"Because you said nightfall... It's too obvious."
"Sir, could you help me?"
"How old are you?"
"I'm only 15."
"What's your name boy?"
"Sir... It's Nhoj."

Will continue later... Make you guys wonder what'll heppen next :P

08-Jun-2007 22:19:33

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