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Logan Shafts
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Labyrinths:
Thats cool, but in the future please simply edit your earlier posts instead of re-posting the story.
If you want to make sure I noticed the edit, go ahead and tell me and I'll re-read it (but I will always check the thread before the judging anyways so don't worry about that).

14-Sep-2010 07:10:34

Eri Vi
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Autumn leaves whipped through the gutters and around the quiet street corners, before being thrown up into the air by the chilly, early-morning currents; he’d never cared much for autumn however, it meant winter was on its way, and the cold was terrible when you lived on the streets.
Samuel sat slumped against the polished, black bricks, his grubby bowler hat, which lay nestled atop his dirty, speckled hair, was pulled low over his sleeping eyes. The soft crinkles in his skin were folded into the same thoughtful, little smile that had graced every New York passerby, who cared to look his way, for years now.
The sun began to rise over the towering structures, and people rushed by while sipping on their steaming lattés and straightening their silhouette-like suits, one man dropped a coin into an empty bowl at Samuel’s feet, but walked away again without a moment’s pause.
‘Lucky fella,’ he joked to himself, ‘wish I could sleep in all day.’
Many hours passed, and the brief respite of day was ending, the growing cold had begun to sink back into the streets, as the last fiery rays of sunlight filtered through the smog-filled rifts between the buildings. Samuel was still against the wall, his ragged trench-coat casting shadows far along the pavement. The streetlights flickered on, and a police car pulled up across from him.
‘Hey there buddy, time you moved on, aye?’ The deep voice of the officer pointed out. When no answer came, he got out of his cruiser, and started to walk towards the old tramp, ‘C’mon, you know you can't stay here at night.’
He reached the decrepit bundle of coats, and lifted the bowler hat from the old, wrinkled face. He soon lowered the hat back over the pallid skin, and sighed, before reaching for the radio at his belt. The cheeky smile on Samuel’s lips seemed to dance under the artificial light – he wouldn’t have to face another winter after all.

14-Sep-2010 09:23:39 - Last edited on 16-Sep-2010 15:00:22 by Eri Vi

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14-Sep-2010 09:24:42 - Last edited on 16-Sep-2010 14:23:48 by Eri Vi

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14-Sep-2010 09:41:43 - Last edited on 16-Sep-2010 14:23:08 by Eri Vi

Logan Shafts
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Alright ITIalevolent, thanks for entering.
If you decide to change it to a shorter story - just edit it and replace those previous ones and then tell me about it lol.
Thanks. Hopefully we'll see more entries soon. =]

Edit: Tragic as that story was, if you do intend to replace it, make sure you save it somewhere. =p

14-Sep-2010 21:29:46 - Last edited on 14-Sep-2010 21:35:58 by Logan Shafts

Legionnaire

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I wrote a story for the contest but I don't know if it is good enough to get a good grade in Brevity.I might post it or I might come up with a new idea. ^_^ Time4Rants RIP Never Forget! 2010-2013, In Memory of Old Timer: ""I'm a doctor, not a spiritual medium!" RIP ;(
Shy Lego 2010-2011 RIP
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Lego x LD= Forbidden Love. Legita=Forbidden Love

14-Sep-2010 21:54:29 - Last edited on 14-Sep-2010 22:07:35 by Legionnaire

Legionnaire

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Only If...
Dear Journal,

I fear, I cannot go on with this pain in my heart. The burden I’m carrying in my heart is so heavy. Every time I wake up, I feel it, eating away at my heart; I fear that some day my body will become dark and I won’t recognize myself. I see the darkness engulfing me like fog hovering over the ground.
I don’t know what to do. Each time I see her, I am overjoy with emotions. She is the light of my tunnel, the flicker of warmth in my heart. I see her each day, her deep, blue-eyes staring into my hazel-eyes; I feel like you could get loss in them, like a maze. Her brown hair swaying with the wind and it drives me crazy, the way she talks is like a sympathy to my ears. I see her perfect smile each day and know that could light the most darkest of nights. Everything about her, causes my heart to ache, not with physical pain, but with the pain of loving someone.
Tomorrow, I will ask her, as I must have her. I must with all my willpower run with haste and ask her. I have to feel her warmth in my arms, I have to; it’s my only way to break this darkness inside me. She is the other half of me and if I can marry her, I know I will be whole again and she will too. She is the sun and I am the faded moon. If I can have her, I will once again be able to shrine my light through the most thickest of clouds; together we will shrine our beacons through the darkest of hours of our lives.
Tomorrow, will be the day that this darkness retreats from me, like soldiers retreating from war. I will once again see my true self. I will no longer feel cold inside and I will love her forever. But...Only...If...I can...have Her.
Time4Rants RIP Never Forget! 2010-2013, In Memory of Old Timer: ""I'm a doctor, not a spiritual medium!" RIP ;(
Shy Lego 2010-2011 RIP
,
Lego x LD= Forbidden Love. Legita=Forbidden Love

14-Sep-2010 22:28:52 - Last edited on 20-Oct-2010 22:30:00 by Legionnaire

Legionnaire

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This new story is fiction.Just to let you all know.I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Time4Rants RIP Never Forget! 2010-2013, In Memory of Old Timer: ""I'm a doctor, not a spiritual medium!" RIP ;(
Shy Lego 2010-2011 RIP
,
Lego x LD= Forbidden Love. Legita=Forbidden Love

14-Sep-2010 22:29:16 - Last edited on 26-Sep-2010 22:21:37 by Legionnaire

Legionnaire

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Well there's my story.We are allowed to change right Logan if I came up with a better idea? Before the deadline and posted it. Time4Rants RIP Never Forget! 2010-2013, In Memory of Old Timer: ""I'm a doctor, not a spiritual medium!" RIP ;(
Shy Lego 2010-2011 RIP
,
Lego x LD= Forbidden Love. Legita=Forbidden Love

14-Sep-2010 22:30:02 - Last edited on 14-Sep-2010 22:30:24 by Legionnaire

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