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Not bad Kyle

*claps*

Now I won't be going through alot of stuff but i'd like to compliment you on charactors. You made like some better then others. Also nice twist with Roland.

Now for the negatives. You havent put the next chapter on yet

Well all for now.

18-Jul-2009 03:27:17

18-Jul-2009 23:43:49

That.Was.Awesome. Best story I ever read, really. Keep up the good work, mate!!

19-Jul-2009 12:25:52

19-Jul-2009 22:58:03

22-Jul-2009 13:29:22

Dear Kylebooker1,

I have returned to read some more of this story, and am once again compiling a certain list of which I know you dread. However, I'm still in the process and won't be finished for awhile. You asked me for my thoughts story-wise, I now consent to give them.

Having completed only a page and a half of your story, I am quite awed by the seamless transfer of ideas and engaging style that you write in. There is a constant pull in your writing that literally draws me into it. I can emphathize well with the characters, and the plot is full of action.
Having not read enough to further comment, I shall conclude with giving this work a solid B on my scale. The grammar is the only thing that holds you back.

I look forward to reading more of this enthralling adventure, but rest assured that no typo shall escape my eye.

27-Jul-2009 16:29:39

31-Jul-2009 22:42:55

01-Aug-2009 14:08:47