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Supreme Pac
Dec Member 2008

Supreme Pac

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"Wow, this story is very enthralling. Read the entire tale in one setting. Based off the...brilliance of this story I would recommend you join The Novelists' Guild and see what kind of rank they give you.

Reasons why I liked it:
Character development is going very well so far. I absolutely love Corugi.
Grammatically it seems pretty much free of error for the most part from what I've spotted.


Paccy IV,
Community Outreach Department. the Novelists' guild"

15-Jul-2011 06:50:41

Corugi

Corugi

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Paccy IV
"Wow, this story is very enthralling. Read the entire tale in one setting. Based off the...brilliance of this story I would recommend you join The Novelists' Guild and see what kind of rank they give you.

Reasons why I liked it:
Character development is going very well so far. I absolutely love Corugi.
Grammatically it seems pretty much free of error for the most part from what I've spotted.
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I have a confession.
I absolutely love Corugi too. I failed to keep my New Year's resolution before I even made it.

15-Jul-2011 23:32:45

Croc 2251

Croc 2251

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Read through the first chapter - found Fred's unintelligence very comical. I noticed a few errors, but I won't point them out unless you'd like me to. I also appreciated the light-hearted ending: everyone on these forums seems to feel that death is the only way to end a story.

18-Jul-2011 21:37:14

Kimzi Caky

Kimzi Caky

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I am glad you enjoyed it. :)
I know it probably has errors or things that don't make sense (and missing semicolons, I don't know how to use them at all!) but that doesn't matter too much to me. I never studied any form of writing and English is my second language.
If you want to point out any errors that's fine with me, but it's not necessary.
I write because I enjoy it and if my stories can make people smile that's good enough for me. ^_^

18-Jul-2011 21:43:17

Croc 2251

Croc 2251

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"I know you are grateful for my services, and I know you are poor and don't have anything to offer me."
HAHAHAHA!
I thought this one's length was more suitable. Very entertaining.
EDIT: Just read the Pit of Doom. Yet another clever ending and a great escapade by the wonderful Corugi! :D

18-Jul-2011 21:48:14 - Last edited on 18-Jul-2011 21:57:40 by Croc 2251

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