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I liked the Snow Globe one.
I understood the symbolism you added in with the beginning and ending sentences. It was uplifting, and the only criticism I have concerning the piece was that I thought you put too much description toward Hephaestus. That paragraph droned on for me, and it seemed like it interupted the flow of the writing.
But again, nice job! I'll be sure to read another at a later date, but alas, I must go to bed now. It's one o'clock in the morning.
I understood the symbolism you added in with the beginning and ending sentences. It was uplifting, and the only criticism I have concerning the piece was that I thought you put too much description toward Hephaestus. That paragraph droned on for me, and it seemed like it interupted the flow of the writing.
But again, nice job! I'll be sure to read another at a later date, but alas, I must go to bed now. It's one o'clock in the morning.
02-Aug-2012 06:06:12 - Last edited on 02-Aug-2012 06:06:59 by Areno3
Profiled.
I will replace the QFC of your old thread with this one's in my "Recommended Reads" part of my thread if you'd like.
I will replace the QFC of your old thread with this one's in my "Recommended Reads" part of my thread if you'd like.
03-Aug-2012 00:16:39
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