Oh and don't worry Ark, I've thought about it and I've decided a plan in the story. I don't really want to spoil anything but I'm going to change something.
EDIT: Geez...a lot of things happened while I was gone
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Thanks! I also like how you edited the first page to mention Ark Van Doom and I.Thanks agian!
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
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Hey i read the story and its very good id like to be in it if possible.
Name:Reid
Race:human
Age:19
Gender:male
weapon:mithril battle axe
Appearence:Yellow long beard and spiky yellow hair
Personality:loves battle and war and keeps to himself ALOT
Family:all died fighting in the war
Other Information:Follows sardomin and has fought by his side.Kinda has a crush on a girl named Amelia thats from Falador.
==+Chapter 6: The Knightly Battle+==
The woman looks over at Dante, she notices that he's looking at her differently than enemies are supposed to look at each other. "Who are you?" Dante asked. The woman looks over at Dante.
"My name is Enyo Dike. Commander of rebel army that serves under the control of Lord Zamorak. We're here under the order of Lord Zamorak." Enyo said.
"Why do I remember you?"
"You might have me confused with someone else."
"No, I wouldn't. You look like someone I know...or at least, knew."
"Are you kidding? Enyo, do you know him?" Iban questioned
"What's his name?"
"Dante."
Enyo pauses for a moment, but she cannot remember a trace about Dante. "No, I do not remember someone with the name of Dante." Enyo said. "Then there's only one thing to do." Dante said. He holds his sword out in-front of him, Stephanie runs over to Dante and stands beside him and points her bow and pull an arrow back. Saradomin walks over to the two as well but he starts to sense something strange in the area. A power of three others walking towards this same mountain, Dante notices that Saradomin notices something different. "Saradomin, what's a matter?" he asks.
"More people are on there way here, to this very mountain." Saradomin replied. Dante looks to his side and looks at Stephanie to pass along the message. "Be prepare Stephanie." Dante stated. Stephanie shakes her head up and down once, understanding what Dante just stated. They both look back over to Iban, Enyo and her knights. "Ivan, stay behind me, alright?" Dante told Ivan. Ivan gulps, he begins to shake and the expression on his face goes into a even more frightened look. A blanket of mist covers the area of the mountain, Dante, Saradomin, and Stephanie wait quietly for them to make a move. Iban runs towards Dante and slashes his sword left, Dante dodges Iban's attack by back flipping, Saradomin launches a Wind Wave at Iban.
Iban jumps out of the way and grabs Ivan and hops back over to the others with a smirk on his face, he holds Ivan in a choke hold with his right arm.
"Argh!" Ivan cried
"Let him go Iban!" Stephanie yelled
"Nah..." Iban said
"H-Help me!" Ivan called
"What to do, what to do."
"Let's take him back to Lord Zamorak." Enyo suggested
"Hmmmm...good idea. But first."
He throws out his left arm in-front of him.
"Attack!" Iban commanded
Two arrows is shot from on top of a tower like cliff and fly towards Stephanie, Dante sees the arrows and runs over.
"Stephanie! Look out!" Dante yelled
"Huh?"
Dante runs behind Stephanie and protects her, the arrows pierces Dante's left shoulder and right upper leg. He begins to pant heavily but still stands. Zaros and another man look pleased at what has happened.
"Hmmm..not who we were after, but it'll do, right Ravinius?" Zaros said
"Yes." Ravinius replied
"Nice shot by the way."
"Hmph."
Saradomin and Stephanie run over to Dante.
"Dante! Are you alright!?" Stephanie asked with a frightened voice
"Y-Yeah. I'm okay." Dante replied
"No, your not. Your badly injury. Sit down and don't get up." Saradomin said
Dante pulls out all the arrows himself, despite how much pain he feels. His vision begins to blurry and he begins to feel numb, he kneels on the ground and begins to have more flashbacks of him sitting beside a bed with a woman laying down seemingly lifeless. His eyes slowly begin to close and he falls onto the ground.
"Dante!!!!" Stephanie screamed
The End of Chapter 6
Next Chapter,
Chapter 7: Tears of Sadness and Madness
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it
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