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Serene End
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==+ Chapter 7: Tears of Sadness and Madness +==

Stephanie shakes Dante ten times, but Dante doesn't move at all, he seemed lifeless. The expression on Stephanie's face goes into just plain terrified. She shakes and looks on in disbelief, Zaros and Ravinius jump down from the cliff they were just on, pleasured at the sight of the frightened Stephanie.

"It seems like the poison is doing quite well, much better than I thought." Ravinius said

"Y-You poisoned him!!?" Stephanie yelled

"Amusing, isn't it...Hahahaha- " Zaros laughed

"That's enough Zaros. It's time to finish them." Ravinius interrupted

"Hmm? Oh, of course."

Ravinius glares back at Stephanie, he points his bow at Stephanie's head and pulls an arrow back. Ravinius jumps back because an arrow was launched at him. He looks up and sees Armadyl, pointing his bow at Ravinius. "Pay back time!" Armadyl yelled. An Earth Wave was launched at Ravinius, he notices it at the last second and blocks it but just barely, he flies and hits the ground but quickly gets back on his feet. Another man appears from the entrance to this part of the mountain, holding a staff up, he looks at Ravinius, Iban, Enyo, and Zaros with pure hatred. Ravinius looks over at this man and remembers his face, he smiles.

"Warriors of Zamorak. It's time you disappear!" The man yelled

"Well, if it isn't that other annoying fly to Lord Zamorak, Seperadith." Iban stated

"Oh Saradomin! I brought a little back up! He'll be down there in a minute!" Armadyl yelled

Another man appears at the entrance, holding his Mithril Battleaxe, Saradomin smiles.

"Ah, Reid. Good to see you again." Saradomin said

"Always a pleasure, Lord Saradomin." Reid said

"Stephanie, rise! We must fight."

"But.."

"It's what Dante would want."

"A-Alright."
The end
is only
the beginning...

26-Aug-2008 16:36:37 - Last edited on 27-Aug-2008 04:15:17 by Serene End

Serene End
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Stephanie rises on her feet and points her bow in-front of her and pulls back an arrow. "Let's go!" Saradomin yelled. Dante looks on with his eyes barely open, he watches the battle. Unable to talk, unable to move, his eyes close and he has a moment of the past flashback in his head. It's that same flashback he just had, of him sitting next to a bed with a woman laying down, seemingly lifeless. "Sir, how are you today?" His butler asked. "Why...we could have...if it only hadn't happened..." Dante cried. "Master Dante, you must know already. You tried everything to save her, but fate just had wanted this to happen.". Dante stands up and grabs his butler's throat. "Don't you ever say that again! I'll find a way to save my beloved even if I must give up my own life just to see her smile, I will!" Dante throws his butler back and he sits back down and his butler runs away out of fear. Hours pass, he continues to sit beside his beloved.

"I'll stay by you always..if only....I could wake you up.." Dante said to his beloved.

"Do you wish to save her?" A voice echoed.

Dante jumps onto his feet.

"I can!? How!?"

A hooded old man appears in-front of Dante. He holds out his hand.

"I'll do anything to save her."

"Grab my hand and I'll give you the power to save her."

"Alright!"

Dante grabs the hooded man's hand. Dante just suddenly started to feel ill, he kneels on the ground by the intensity of the pain he's in. He looks up at the old man, the old man smiles like a madman. "Foolish mortal, you were merely tricked. Besides, your family deserves this." The man said. "Wh-who are you!?" Dante asked. The old man transformed into Iban. "I-Iban?" Dante shuddered "That's right, it's me." Iban said. Dante's eyes slowly close, "Darn it all..." Dante said before he hit the ground. Back in the present, Dante opens his eyes, he lays on his bed in his room back at his rebel army's Headquarters.
The end
is only
the beginning...

26-Aug-2008 16:41:22

Serene End
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He sits up and looks around, "What was that dream all about?" Dante said to himself. "So, that Super Anti poison potion did the trick, I see." Seperadith said. Dante jumps out of his bed and stands in a position as if he were to fight. "Calm down. I'm not an enemy, I'm your ally." Saradomin, Stephanie and Reid walk into the room. "Dante!" Stephanie franticly said. She ran and hugged Dante, he blushes. "I'm so happy knowing that you're alright.". "Y-Yeah...me too." Dante said with relief. "Glad to have you back Dante." Reid said.

The End of Chapter 7
Next Chapter,
Chapter 8: The Flow

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it ^_^

P.S: I tried my best to get all characters into Chapter 7 so I had to modify that plan I had, but it somewhat came together =P .
The end
is only
the beginning...

26-Aug-2008 16:43:09 - Last edited on 05-Nov-2014 14:04:05 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

Ark Von Doom

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another great chapter, the only mistakes i see are 'much more better' when it should just be much better and i think you mean expected instead of thought . keep it up :)
p.s the mistake is on Raviniuses first line in the first chapter 7 post

27-Aug-2008 00:26:33 - Last edited on 27-Aug-2008 00:30:09 by Ark Von Doom

Kitties Rule

Kitties Rule

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my bio:
name:jikvald hradson
race:human
age:34
armour/weps:yak hide armour and a fremmenik sword
other info:he was born a fremmenick called drotis (his name was changed when he completed his trials of manhood)and he was a good sword fighter he has pale skin,long dark hair and a small beard.
he has a very firery temper and even tho he is a good kind man he can get angry in the blink of an eye.
he has a dislike to fredrick ivan and sep as they are all magic users and as a fremmenik he does not like magic and see,s it as work to be left for the gods.
he serves saradomin

28-Aug-2008 17:36:03 - Last edited on 29-Aug-2008 08:43:15 by Kitties Rule

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