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! Thanks very much I am honoured I'm not the best at prose, but I enjoy writing script, so I may be better at writing a sitcom rather than a book
+ ROFL!
++ Gratz on 200th post

17-Dec-2010 13:47:56 - Last edited on 17-Dec-2010 13:49:50 by Snakus Viper

Your a good person. :D

17-Dec-2010 22:45:05

Yay for fanboyism
Bump!

20-Dec-2010 13:36:35 - Last edited on 20-Dec-2010 13:36:48 by Icedog1003

20-Dec-2010 18:49:15

Hope you don't mind, I'm giving a quick review.

This should be one of the leading Noob stories. Unlike most Noob stories this has gone through a series, and the storyline stays exciting, and it doesn't drift from the funniness into seriousness like most Noob stories. I find it nice that you write in script, So it's easier to understand. I'm not trying to criticize Prose but it's sometimes hard to read with the words all jumbled up together like so:
Chapter 1a - The Worst Birthday Ever
Nooby - Ready or not! Here I come!
Ice - Ugh... do we have to play Hide and Seek?
Nooby - It's my birthday!
Ice - Actually it's mine... Nooberela - It is Ice's birthday Nooby
Nooby - If it was Ice's birthday I’d have written down it on my calendar (checks, it has "Nooby's Birthday" written on it) see! It's my birthday!
Nooberela - It has "Nooby's Birthday" written on everyday
Nooby - I love birthdays!
Noobio - I love cake!
You keep people laughing and wanting more.

BTW: Make a new chapter will ya?

20-Dec-2010 23:39:58

21-Dec-2010 00:19:17

Sorry guys, another post with many points (This is point one )
Point two - Thankyou DarkRose, that really made my day (for good person comment)
Point three - What is fanboyism
Point four - Thanks for the review, I always enjoy them. Good to know what is good and what is bad. I know what you mean about the lines being close together, I can find it hard to read stories like that (makes my head hurt).
Point five - New chapter will be coming soon (:
Point six - Thanks for comment Carsten, and I shall add them to my now quickly growing reading list.
Point seven - No more points!

21-Dec-2010 15:45:45

I hope you like my stories as much i like yours.

21-Dec-2010 15:54:27

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