I've been following your story for a long time now, and I must say you've really evolved and improved as a writer since your earlier chapters. Well done, and keep up the good work.
Can you guys take a peek at mine? I think they're rather good. (not sir shryke err whatever, but flesh is very good)
I'm relatively new to the stories forum, but I've been writing 5 years. I'd love to have your feedback, thanx