Your questionable sentence structure makes for some hilarious reading, which makes this story one of the funniest on the forums - and it can be funny without referencing noobs
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P.S. Just thought I'd make your life easier by correcting a sentence somewhere around page 10:
YOU WROTE:
'I know why your full of sorrow this lovely morning'
MY CORRECT VERSION
'I know why you're full of sorrow this lovely morning'
Hope I could help - great story by the way.
25-Oct-2009 19:46:17
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25-Oct-2009 20:01:52
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Crocefisso