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Firstly, Oh snap.
Secondly, ..why not just get Barth to sew up Richard's nose? It's a healthy repair, aaaand it looks horrible. Everybody wins!
Thirdly... I am assuming Modello never read RTS. Thinking back on it, this story now carries alot of similarities to it- Main one being that the main character is controlled by some random deity.
Fourthly, Oh snap.
All in all, epic.
~Seph
Void Knight, Master Thief-to-be, Wielder of the Ancient Magyks, Lover of Meatloaf. The music kind.
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
Secondly, ..why not just get Barth to sew up Richard's nose? It's a healthy repair, aaaand it looks horrible. Everybody wins!
Thirdly... I am assuming Modello never read RTS. Thinking back on it, this story now carries alot of similarities to it- Main one being that the main character is controlled by some random deity.
Fourthly, Oh snap.
All in all, epic.
~Seph
Void Knight, Master Thief-to-be, Wielder of the Ancient Magyks, Lover of Meatloaf. The music kind.
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
17-May-2010 19:30:06 - Last edited on 17-May-2010 19:31:17 by Seph
"Secondly, ..why not just get Barth to sew up Richard's nose? It's a healthy repair, aaaand it looks horrible. Everybody wins!
"
Richard: HORRIBLE!? Are you kidding me!? I don't DO horrible, otherwise I'd look like a Halloween monster...I'm perfect, and that would be well...horrible.
Moriah: You can't possibly be perfect, you moron. =.=
Richard: And why is that?
Moriah: Because then you'd have to be perfectly ugly, perfectly imperfect, perfectly stupid, which you are already perfect at, by the way. And far more negative things.
Richard: Haha, silly girl. Ugliness, imperfection, and stupidity have absolutely nothing to do with perfection.
Moriah: *sighs* Why do I even bother with you?
Richard: Yes, now enough of the small talk and fix my beautiful nose please.
Moriah: *sighs again*
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"Thirdly... I am assuming Modello never read RTS. Thinking back on it, this story now carries alot of similarities to it- Main one being that the main character is controlled by some random deity."
Well, actually Seph, Modello isn't being controlled by a random deity, just is a bloodline descendant of one. o.o And no, I don't think Modello's ever read RTS. o:
What are the other similarities? I wanna try to keep this as original as possible. D:
…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
"
Richard: HORRIBLE!? Are you kidding me!? I don't DO horrible, otherwise I'd look like a Halloween monster...I'm perfect, and that would be well...horrible.
Moriah: You can't possibly be perfect, you moron. =.=
Richard: And why is that?
Moriah: Because then you'd have to be perfectly ugly, perfectly imperfect, perfectly stupid, which you are already perfect at, by the way. And far more negative things.
Richard: Haha, silly girl. Ugliness, imperfection, and stupidity have absolutely nothing to do with perfection.
Moriah: *sighs* Why do I even bother with you?
Richard: Yes, now enough of the small talk and fix my beautiful nose please.
Moriah: *sighs again*
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"Thirdly... I am assuming Modello never read RTS. Thinking back on it, this story now carries alot of similarities to it- Main one being that the main character is controlled by some random deity."
Well, actually Seph, Modello isn't being controlled by a random deity, just is a bloodline descendant of one. o.o And no, I don't think Modello's ever read RTS. o:
What are the other similarities? I wanna try to keep this as original as possible. D:
…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
The end
is only
the beginning...
18-May-2010 00:07:45
How do you sew up a punched nose
I'm sure Bart would find a way but... HUUUUUH!?
I did notice a reference to Bart though
"Because let me tell you, I can find a really nice guy who is an expert at sewing!"
* * *
No wonder everyone thought Zion was responsible... Parents are just being silly when they have kids with 1 letter differences in their names!
Still... Ivah is a suspect >_< His flowery 'I'm just trying to help my buddy' language might end up giving Alrous another friend...
Alrous: Yay!
Salomon: Woot!
Alrous: Shaddup.
Salomon:
* * *
Richard: Now, please fix my beautiful nose!
Moriah: *sticks a clown nose on* Done.
Richard: >_< *honk*
* * *
Moriah: *sticks a carrot on*
Richard: >_< *chomp*
* * *
Moriah: *sticks a fake mustachioed nose with glasses on*
Richard: It's a me, Mario!
* * *
Moriah: *fixes nose*
Richard: On second thought... Does this nose make me look fat?
* * *
Moriah: *sticks a painted target on*
Richard: I don't get- *Moriah punches him in the face again*
* * *
Another great chapter
I'm sure Bart would find a way but... HUUUUUH!?
I did notice a reference to Bart though
"Because let me tell you, I can find a really nice guy who is an expert at sewing!"
* * *
No wonder everyone thought Zion was responsible... Parents are just being silly when they have kids with 1 letter differences in their names!
Still... Ivah is a suspect >_< His flowery 'I'm just trying to help my buddy' language might end up giving Alrous another friend...
Alrous: Yay!
Salomon: Woot!
Alrous: Shaddup.
Salomon:
* * *
Richard: Now, please fix my beautiful nose!
Moriah: *sticks a clown nose on* Done.
Richard: >_< *honk*
* * *
Moriah: *sticks a carrot on*
Richard: >_< *chomp*
* * *
Moriah: *sticks a fake mustachioed nose with glasses on*
Richard: It's a me, Mario!
* * *
Moriah: *fixes nose*
Richard: On second thought... Does this nose make me look fat?
* * *
Moriah: *sticks a painted target on*
Richard: I don't get- *Moriah punches him in the face again*
* * *
Another great chapter
18-May-2010 00:58:07
Yeah, I put in that reference, figured you would like it.
It just seemed appropriate.
And the extremely close naming has a purpose, wouldn't-cha-know? And the two have been around for much longer than you think, soon to be revealed, and I mean a faaaaar away soon. o_o
Oh, and Modello's overreaction to the taking of his hat will also be told. He's got good reason too!
Ivah: Why must you suspect me? I hold no iniquity as long as I serve Lord Zion.
Uh-huh, I'm soooo sure...>.>
Salomon: Why do you all have to hate!? I'm just a nice guy! D:
Alrous: Oh, go cry somewhere, please.
Salomon: FINE, I WILL!! *runs off*
Alrous: About time...
"Moriah: *sticks a painted target on*
Richard: I don't get- *Moriah punches him in the face again*"
ROFL...xD
Richard: That's ridiculous. But it sounds just like her.
Moriah: *rolls eyes* Oh, yeah. Definitely does...
Richard: I'm not the criminal here.
Moriah: *points up* Look, a mirror!
Richard: *looks up* Oh, my God, let me see my beauty!
Moriah: *punches Richard in the face* I'm sorry, it's too much fun.
And a head's up to let everyone know, I think almost - if not - all bio characters should make an appearance in the next chapter. o.o
…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
It just seemed appropriate.
And the extremely close naming has a purpose, wouldn't-cha-know? And the two have been around for much longer than you think, soon to be revealed, and I mean a faaaaar away soon. o_o
Oh, and Modello's overreaction to the taking of his hat will also be told. He's got good reason too!
Ivah: Why must you suspect me? I hold no iniquity as long as I serve Lord Zion.
Uh-huh, I'm soooo sure...>.>
Salomon: Why do you all have to hate!? I'm just a nice guy! D:
Alrous: Oh, go cry somewhere, please.
Salomon: FINE, I WILL!! *runs off*
Alrous: About time...
"Moriah: *sticks a painted target on*
Richard: I don't get- *Moriah punches him in the face again*"
ROFL...xD
Richard: That's ridiculous. But it sounds just like her.
Moriah: *rolls eyes* Oh, yeah. Definitely does...
Richard: I'm not the criminal here.
Moriah: *points up* Look, a mirror!
Richard: *looks up* Oh, my God, let me see my beauty!
Moriah: *punches Richard in the face* I'm sorry, it's too much fun.
And a head's up to let everyone know, I think almost - if not - all bio characters should make an appearance in the next chapter. o.o
…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
The end
is only
the beginning...
18-May-2010 02:27:17
...No comment.
~Seph
Void Knight, Possible Master Thief-to-be, Wielder of the Ancient Magyks, Bored. "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
~Seph
Void Knight, Possible Master Thief-to-be, Wielder of the Ancient Magyks, Bored. "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
18-May-2010 04:50:28 - Last edited on 18-May-2010 04:50:42 by Seph
100th post! FOR GREAT JUSTICE!
Sorry you had a bad day
Take as long as you need; we understand. My friend has been sick for three days, and I'm worried he might have some nasty virus... Hopefully not of the T variety
Its an icky season Spring. Must be something in the air (besides the pollen
).
My one spot of good news is that my thirteen week summer vacation starts Saturday! So... motivation! And I'm Chief Justice in our mock Supreme Court case for history. Though they made me use their gavel; for some reason they thought a sledgehammer wasn't weildable enough
Looking forward to the chapter whenever you get it out
For now, 100th post for the win!
Sorry you had a bad day
Take as long as you need; we understand. My friend has been sick for three days, and I'm worried he might have some nasty virus... Hopefully not of the T variety
Its an icky season Spring. Must be something in the air (besides the pollen
).
My one spot of good news is that my thirteen week summer vacation starts Saturday! So... motivation! And I'm Chief Justice in our mock Supreme Court case for history. Though they made me use their gavel; for some reason they thought a sledgehammer wasn't weildable enough
Looking forward to the chapter whenever you get it out
For now, 100th post for the win!
19-May-2010 05:25:19
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