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9.5/10, The beggining of the story was excel(c)ent, the middle was amazing, however it kind of slowed down near the end and I expected some more action/detail on the final battle.

By the way, do you mind if a write a ministory that takes place during the war, the battle of Yannile?

08-Jun-2006 22:24:44 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2006 22:25:37 by [#ED63TJVWD]

Xanthangum
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woot :D

I think there is gonna be another :P


I can see this, theres gonna be a movie and at the end of the movie, a person Exactly like zezima (zezima2 :P ) Would look up while fishing and it would end all suddenly. Yes.

09-Jun-2006 03:02:04

E Durkheim

E Durkheim

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i just finished reading the last chapter and 4 things

1 normally when im reading i start tink of other chapters and i evend dont know what im reading just confusing words so if it sayed in the story ¿how did zezima died?

2 zezima2 is a good end will you make a new book maybe called THE FOURTH REBELLION but this time there would be a new group of level 50+ people that before where noobs leaded by zezima2 that see every week some people being killed just cause they like to train combat and them there whit no place to be karamaja and island full most of runescape noobs killing them so then secretily the find xanandu and start reconstructing it and make that their when a day they got a big army so so big leaved by zezima in that time level 126 and kill the noobs
things could hapen in the story like important noobs getting to level 50 and inclusiv texan85 and cheezit93

3 noooooooooooooooooooooooooo cheezit93 cant be *****it92 cheezit 93 is ligth blue(cause the 3 is light blue) and cheezit92 is yellow(cause the 2 is yellow) and cheezit93 is intelligent is was just another guy that liked cheezit so he wanted a name whit it so he put cheezit 1,2,3,4,5,5,6,7,8 etc and none worked till he got to 93
i hate new cheezit!!!! no one get back to life to follow a guy that taked his ashes and then fall down from a tower

4 is mr.happy dead? well he falled from the tower whit numanuma3 and cheezit92 and numanuma3 and cheezit92 died in the final batle the 3 dint appear so i think numanuma3 and cheezit died that way and mr.happy is dead to

10-Jun-2006 15:03:00 - Last edited on 10-Jun-2006 15:13:55 by E Durkheim

E Durkheim

E Durkheim

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this story is good cause in all good stories it satrt whit lots of action but then it gets more history(history of the story ovious) and in the end it gets a bit more of action but it stills whit history

but the bad thing is that most of important noobs died so there was only cheezit and raderdashng noobs in the end

same whit outcast only blaa blety mr happy setchat and xanathumg or something

but elitist where all but the bad thing was that they never appeared, it came and epoch whit only zezima or numanuma3

and chapter stealers is a zezima chapter but after a while it start talking abaout other characters but is good and i had voted so i cant change it but if qaz let me i change it to 9.5

10-Jun-2006 15:20:39

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