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IronAbs92

IronAbs92

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I'm going to give it a rating of 9, as it began well, and ended well, but from about halfway through Elitist to the last threeish chapters of Outcast, it slowed down, and showed the long haul of war. However, it became less interesting.

06-Jun-2006 14:19:23

Parakarry267

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That took forever to read. Seriously.

I could really care less about whether or not you wrote in script, as long as you could tell what the characters were saying.

After the long journey of reading this, the length and plot flow together to make a nice story.

I can't rate this. It'd end up being something like 9.471212986019860/10 or something. (Not that that is an actual rating, but I'm just saying.)

I only have one thing to say to you.

Good job on making it this far with a story like this.

07-Jun-2006 06:21:25

Xanthangum
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Xanthangum

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WOOT i just finished the last chapter,

I rate the story 9.5/10

I didnt give it the .5 because I dont get what happened with zezima, he never died :S And there are just some other loose ties but i think it still rocked! :D

08-Jun-2006 00:27:37

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