Whoa what, a new chapter?
OK, page 133, Telvern and Elliott talk about the believed death of him and his wife. The talk gets tense, Telvern alludes to his faked demise, the struggle of self-discovery, and the human problem. Jeanne was his wife, a victim, and Divus let him escape.
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Who's Ormemel? Electrical conductor, Lumbridge folk. Telvern gets his dagger out upon a question. They discuss the assault, some history, assassinations, the Resistance.
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They continue talking, and are interrupted by a guard. Note it's better to grab the bottom of the palm instead of the wrist to secure a held weapon. Elliott may help the Resistance. Foirfeach, once Draynor Village. Ya, lots of willows there. Rimmington is still dilapidated, but gods work here. Melzar's Maze? OK, this seems to go back to the previous heroes.
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Happy Calvin! I just lost my place :/ Ah, Melzar's Maze I think! I like the personification you give it. Does he find Arrav's shield? Santa Claus! Bread and mead. They talk about the situation and then plans of attack. Lady of Wine? Sounds good! Seems characters get the biggest reactions from words, but I think most people are like that anyways.
“have fun with your waste of time”
Ha, loved this!
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Six days pass. Village life; Rimmington rather contrasts the rest of the world, hunh? Oo, a jack-in-the-box! Heh, I like how you portray children, Calvin creeping upon that toy, very nicely done. Telvern comes. The assassins are quite loyal to their queen. The genius tells them Momus died, and alludes to the funeral's procession. They plan their attack; causing widespread fire would be useful. Wine lady! Sounds good! Oh, maybe the statue does have magic powers.
OK, I read up to page 138, I'll stop here for a break. But ya, another chapter is up and I'm not done reading this one, and I easily forget about this story, due to me working on several projects over three different websites and reading other peoples' works!
07-Apr-2016 04:30:51