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BAH, sleeplessness is a plague! Fairly late into the night, trying to sleep. When suddenly, thoughts run rampant! Anyway... uh, welcome back? I didn't know you had left, but I hope your trip went well!
"The first sentence of chapter 22 ends a bit weirdly, I think it needs a quick fix."
Really? Let me quickly skim...
...Yeah, it's a bit odd. Let me see what I can do about that. Not sure if that flows better, but I tried!
Yay! I took in what you had suggested, so I tried it a little there. Not sure how well I did, but... yeah.
"*blink* *blink* why are your chapters getting so long? D:"
I DON'T KNOW. I'll check the amount of characters and words I use at one point, be like, "Oh, okay." Then I'll start writing on the next scene, then check again after I'm done writing on it. All of the sudden, it bumps up by, like, five-thousand words. XD It's rinse and repeat, a vicious cycle!
"Ah, the French are within context of the story! They sure know how to get around."
It's the hairstyle! I really like the French Braid~ Well, I suppose I could go back and say that it's "banded together in a French Braid-esque ponytail."
"Gallows has a slight predicament. If I were him, I’d give the boy a knife and tell him to go kill the king."
He probably would end up getting a swift boot to the face.
DOORKNOB! ...That amused me more than it should've.
"Be sure to tell Balor I said he sucks!"
I suspect he secretly already knows it.
...I also suspect seven chapters is going to bump up to eight. Next chapter has several scenes, and with how things have been as of late, I wouldn't be at all surprised if another chapter gets added. xD
Anyway, thank you once more for your time and for reading! As always, it is much appreciated.
Sleeeeeeeeeeep... Must sleeeeeeeeeep...
"The first sentence of chapter 22 ends a bit weirdly, I think it needs a quick fix."
Really? Let me quickly skim...
...Yeah, it's a bit odd. Let me see what I can do about that. Not sure if that flows better, but I tried!
Yay! I took in what you had suggested, so I tried it a little there. Not sure how well I did, but... yeah.
"*blink* *blink* why are your chapters getting so long? D:"
I DON'T KNOW. I'll check the amount of characters and words I use at one point, be like, "Oh, okay." Then I'll start writing on the next scene, then check again after I'm done writing on it. All of the sudden, it bumps up by, like, five-thousand words. XD It's rinse and repeat, a vicious cycle!
"Ah, the French are within context of the story! They sure know how to get around."
It's the hairstyle! I really like the French Braid~ Well, I suppose I could go back and say that it's "banded together in a French Braid-esque ponytail."
"Gallows has a slight predicament. If I were him, I’d give the boy a knife and tell him to go kill the king."
He probably would end up getting a swift boot to the face.
DOORKNOB! ...That amused me more than it should've.
"Be sure to tell Balor I said he sucks!"
I suspect he secretly already knows it.
...I also suspect seven chapters is going to bump up to eight. Next chapter has several scenes, and with how things have been as of late, I wouldn't be at all surprised if another chapter gets added. xD
Anyway, thank you once more for your time and for reading! As always, it is much appreciated.
Sleeeeeeeeeeep... Must sleeeeeeeeeep...
The end
is only
the beginning...
22-Oct-2014 08:56:39
I don't know why, but there's few things that amuse me more than a well-played bit of randomness. It's a tad odd, but not many things can make me laugh. Most of today's "humor" doesn't make me budge (unless it's pun-making, which I enjoy perhaps a little too much for some reason) but references and randomness, albeit not randomness just to be so, makes me laugh everytime.
Being tired is particularly annoying when trying to do something that requires focus, like drawing. I'm not quite sure why I even bothered, but I've been in a bit of a drawing mood, so I tried my hand at some drawing. Needless to say that I ended up ragequitting, things weren't coming out properly and it was really bothering me!
"I am often thinking of my stories, so much that maybe it's the reason why I can't sleep."
That exactly, it's between thinking about stories and just in general real-life worries. I rarely get such dreams, it's mostly real-life and random weird, eerie, senseless stuff. I actually wanted to write down Raphael having a nightmare inspired by one I had a while ago, but I cut it out 'cause I thought it didn't fit.
"when I was a kid and had dreams of being crushed by animate machinery."
... That's a little... messed up? XD
Anyway, I think I've chatted enough. I'm in a bit of a talkative mood, so you'll have to forgive me for my unnecessary chatter. But yeah, stuff!
…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
Being tired is particularly annoying when trying to do something that requires focus, like drawing. I'm not quite sure why I even bothered, but I've been in a bit of a drawing mood, so I tried my hand at some drawing. Needless to say that I ended up ragequitting, things weren't coming out properly and it was really bothering me!
"I am often thinking of my stories, so much that maybe it's the reason why I can't sleep."
That exactly, it's between thinking about stories and just in general real-life worries. I rarely get such dreams, it's mostly real-life and random weird, eerie, senseless stuff. I actually wanted to write down Raphael having a nightmare inspired by one I had a while ago, but I cut it out 'cause I thought it didn't fit.
"when I was a kid and had dreams of being crushed by animate machinery."
... That's a little... messed up? XD
Anyway, I think I've chatted enough. I'm in a bit of a talkative mood, so you'll have to forgive me for my unnecessary chatter. But yeah, stuff!
…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
The end
is only
the beginning...
22-Oct-2014 20:21:27 - Last edited on 22-Oct-2014 20:37:48 by Serene End
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