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Azigarath

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"@Azi: I don't believe in Freddy, though. And In Tincidunt Vivamus Tonitrui is from the Forum Fight, not some fairy tale, so your point is entirely invalid. "
lol
Good chapters though Gandy, I like long chapters.

Oh, and:
"He filled the sinkholes underneath the ground with heavily poisoned water, to kill creatures that fell in."
wouldn't they drown in it in the first place?
"He also placed wooden stakes in rings around the walls, which would stab the demons if they walked into them"
Um, why would they walk into them, too? I suppose a complete frontal assault could push those in the front lines into the stakes, though.
And the action was a bit point-form, but oh well, good enough for building detail.



People don't drink what they swim in, but perhaps it's the kind of poison that goes through your skin and kills you moments later. Thanks for pointing that out though, I did not notice. I had no idea that people can swim.

15-Dec-2011 06:58:22 - Last edited on 17-Dec-2011 02:32:26 by Azigarath

Script Mak3r

Script Mak3r

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@Azi: About the poisoned water: If they can swim, then they could get in from there, but poison the water, and they die first. Lord Yatagarasu, the Black Sun.
Thank you for giving me your power.

The sunlight that rains down on the Earth
is a nuclear furnace that will create new atoms.

My ultimate nuclear fusion will burn up
every body, heart, phantom, and fairy!

15-Dec-2011 23:37:50

Script Mak3r

Script Mak3r

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Never retreat! But advance backwards if you must! Lord Yatagarasu, the Black Sun.
Thank you for giving me your power.

The sunlight that rains down on the Earth
is a nuclear furnace that will create new atoms.

My ultimate nuclear fusion will burn up
every body, heart, phantom, and fairy!

17-Dec-2011 14:12:16

Gandalf-0

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Another chapter coming up...
Azi, as Script said, the main reason for poisoned water is that some creatures would eventually manage to struggle their way out, and Gregory wanted them dead before they had that chance.
The demons would impale themselves on stakes for a few reasons. First, they are not so intelligent, and in an all-out charge they probably lost their heads. (what heads they had) Second, they are very big, and stakes put closely together are not very easy to avoid when you have a massive lumbering body and are running as fast as you can. Lastly, as you mentioned, this is a full charge, and it isn't really possible to stop when you must run on to avoid being trampled by those behind you.
And here is the next chapter!

18-Dec-2011 03:05:37

Gandalf-0

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Chapter XXVII
Power. What a wonderful thing. If you don’t have it, that is. Gregory was barely realizing that with power comes responsibility and rivals, and if you fail to fight well, you lose your power. He had raised the wrath of a god and two Mahjarrat, and his rivals were fighting more powerfully then he could wish. His responsibilities were huge as well, because he had given Lucien a degree of power so great that he was more dangerous every day. And now yet another problem was about to take place.
“Gregory.” Saradomin appeared behind Gregory’s throne, startling him.
“Yes, my lord? What has happened now?*
*Gregory you are in danger. Guthix is to come after you soon. Very, very soon.”
“Why?”
“He sees you as a threat to the safety of Gelinor. You see, his occupation is making sure that the gods do not get too powerful to destroy life here, and he is constantly checking us. Also, if one of our followers becomes too powerful, he immediately destroys them so as to not give an unfair advantage to either side. He sees you as such a threat.”
“But what about Lucien? He is just as dangerous as me, maybe more so...”
“Indeed... but Lucien is not the servant of Zamorak. He has no alignment. And Guthix is so pig-headed that he only cares that us gods don’t destroy Runescape... but he never notices other powers.”
“Should I hide?”
“I think you should stay here for now. If he comes, and is about to destroy you, I will teleport you to my realm, and then later put you back to defend Runescape from Lucien. I must go now before he detects me... good day.”
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18-Dec-2011 03:06:53 - Last edited on 18-Dec-2011 03:17:26 by Gandalf-0

Gandalf-0

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Gregory was sitting on his throne, looking out on the field of battle with disbelief. Why would Guthix use such an army when he could just destroy the tower with one blow? The army was massive.
In essence, the army of Guthix was nature, and his force was made of nature incarnate. Water titans, lava titans, swamp titans, ents, dryads, and other diverse creatures were his military. And he had collected at least fifty million of them.
“Why!?!?! Why do you do this to me Guthix? Is not destroying me enough? Why must you destroy me slowly!?!”
“Well,” Guthix replied, “let me just say I enjoy it. Destruction can be fun, in its proper place.”
The army advanced twice as fast as Lucien’s had, and they were undefeatable. All the titans were immune to the arrows, the titans made of wood would be washed down by the water titans if burned, and all but the dryads were immune to the magic. When they reached the walls, the lava titans melted the wall and the ents smashed it. At this point, Gregory gave it up for lost, and called for Saradomin to take him, and remove him from the agony of watching his tower being taken apart, piece by piece.

18-Dec-2011 03:07:35

Gandalf-0

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Chapter XXVIII
“What now? I feel useless. I cannot do anything with Guthix at large, and Lucien will be free to ravage the towns in my absence.”
“Ah, but there you are wrong. I can put you back easily, for although Guthix is powerful, he is not omnipotent. He is also shamefully lazy for a god, always wanting to go to sleep. Therefore he doesn’t do a very good job of finding people, and when there is a person he truly hates and wishes to find, it generally takes him a long time. I think you are safe.”
“Are you sure?”
“Yes. I will now give you the power to change your appearance at will. It may seem a strange power, but all you have to do is think about what you wish to look like, and your body will morph into that shape. If you wish, you can also enchant clothing to change with you, to complete the disguise. Lastly, you may also change your voice and accent so as not to be found out.”
“Really?!?! This is superb! Do you truly think this will work?”
“Indeed it will. Guthix is very lazy, and with a disguise on he will have more difficulty seeing you. Just be careful not to bring attention to yourself.”
“One more thing. If I morph into a muscular person, will I have use of the muscles I have, or my real strength? I am purely a mage, and if I get in a brawl I don’t want to be restricted to using magic.”
“Oh of course. You will have use of whatever muscles you morph to have.”
“Very well. I thank you. I will be off.”
“Farewell.”
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18-Dec-2011 03:08:29

Gandalf-0

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Gregory was teleported to Relekka, and after a few hours of morphing into every form imaginable and looking into a nearby stream as a river, he finally got bored and headed into the town. Interestingly enough, he could also morph into a female form, (strange though that may seem) and he planned to use it in future if needed.
For this occasion, he took on the form of a grizzled Fremmenik warrior with bulging muscles (he liked that part). He decided to use the name Taltin. He walked into the village, and straight up to the town hall. The king greeted him.
“Hello Fremmenik! Welcome to our town. I do not believe I know you very well...”

“Hello! My name is Taltin and I have not been here for a long time. I was but a small boy when I lived here.”
“Indeed! Well then welcome back. It is not often that I see such a... strong man. Where did you obtain your strength.”
“From many years of training my lord. I would be willing to fight, but really I am just wandering the world, exploring. I was unfortunate to meet a storm recently however, and lost my weapons and provisions when a wild panther attacked me.”
On a sudden idea, Gregory morphed a frightful claw **** on the side of his chest, and then uncovered the cloak to show the king.
“Well! That looks like quite a bad wound. I wonder that you are alive. How did you escape?”

18-Dec-2011 03:08:42

Gandalf-0

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“I did*’t. I grabbed the panther and killed it with my bare hands. After it attacked my side, I was able to kill it with ease and without any more wounds.”
“Well done! I will get some medics to aid you.”
“Many thanks. I have heard about an island to the north. I hear it is named ‘Lunar Isle.’ Can you help me to go there?”
The king’s face darkened. “They are our enemies, and we do not have connection with them because they began to make their own runes, abandoning our rule of only using the runes of Guthix. I cannot help you.”
“Very well then. I will be going to find another way to get there then, as I have heard many things about the place.”
“They will not admit you without a seal of passage. They will teleport you back here, or worse, kill you...”
“We will see.*
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