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Why don't you make it that Ezril can transform into a black demon? I got that idea from another thread and got the author's permission for my story i'm sure he won't mind you using it :)

Oh yea and i'm off again for the night. Can't wait for next add.

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02-May-2007 21:45:07 - Last edited on 02-May-2007 21:46:06 by [#H7XWS060E]

Jaggedtoothe

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just some hints

He looked up and saw an elf standing on the hill, trying to keep all the undeads back. "Need any help?" asked Ezril. "Not really. Ranging is in my blood, I can handle them" "Well you're taking all the fun, so i guess I'll help too" said Ezril back. He pulled out his Magic Short Bow.

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chapter in paragraph 4 shoudn't the "too" be anyway. Also it gets real confusing in some places were you don't say who's talking. nice story btw. i should right another story besides my noob one.

03-May-2007 04:01:18 - Last edited on 03-May-2007 04:01:54 by Jaggedtoothe

NoodleBobert

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Well, I'll be back to my regular postings of 4 posts a day or more tomorrow, I was busy today. By the way, I have a new story, an attempt at a horror. It's called...
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Silence of the Shadows

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Anyways, bye!

04-May-2007 02:52:50 - Last edited on 04-May-2007 02:54:22 by NoodleBobert

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