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And also, this is a great story.
But improve your punctuation and hit "enter" every time a new character speaks or does an action.
For example...
Verac swung, but whatshisname dodged.
"Ha! you're too slow!" shouted whatshisname

01-Apr-2007 20:56:14

NoodleBobert

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Thanks for the advice ^_^

01-Apr-2007 21:02:47

NoodleBobert

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I'll work on punctuation but the other thing about hitting enter I don't understand completly lol

Also, if I do that I think I'll have too many characters O_o

01-Apr-2007 21:03:20 - Last edited on 01-Apr-2007 21:07:31 by NoodleBobert

NoodleBobert

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Gonna add reserves soon

01-Apr-2007 21:07:49

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