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Seph
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Great Chapter!




Hmm....I'm assuming....Oh dear, not that agian...




I knew it! this story is insane! It has Demonic Brothers, Smelly vampires, a Freakishly bizzare....thing, A guy Ballroom dancing with an axe, A jerk that lost everything, And a summersaulting swordsman!



~Wigwam126
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

28-Mar-2009 21:12:45

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Well, I can agree with everything but one thing...Smelly Vampires? o.o

There's no need to name call, even vampires have feelings. By the way, who's the jerk -- Cassius? That's not right to call him a jerk, even if it is part way true. (don't let him know I said that). Oh, and I do agree about the Ballroom Dancing thing :P

P.S: Oooo, now I just remembered the jerk that lost everything! Rofl!

~Biomaster7
The end
is only
the beginning...

28-Mar-2009 22:09:00 - Last edited on 28-Mar-2009 22:11:06 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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Rofl, you used the line straight from Kvetch's bio :p

Is Kvetch the freakishly bizarre thing? You know what they say: What doesn't kill you makes you... stranger :P

Sephiroth's sword takes up multiple pages of the KH2 strategy guide :p But Wesker does indeed get a really, really, really *hours pass of me just saying 'really'* really, really, really big sword! Or at least a swordlike, blade-thingy. Just keep playing an you'll know :p

To Wigwam: Sephiroth a half-chicken; ridiculous! He is obviously a half-turkey, evolving a massive sword to fight back at the terror of Thanksgiving (The terror being that rice dish that one of my family members made :@ )

29-Mar-2009 03:19:23 - Last edited on 29-Mar-2009 03:20:03 by Ark Von Doom

Seph
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Hmm, thinking back on the subject of KH2 really brings back memories....




I haven't started up my PS2 in a while...I think i'm gonna go kick Sephiroth's ass agian....oh, it never gets old... :D



Also, Thanksgiving? No, I thought the sword was for two things: to be the first million mile long gravy resistant sword and for promotional perposes..... O_o



~/*\~

All bow to the mighty and all powerful symbol of Wigwam!


No?


How dare you disobey me!


I shall loosen my blade and run you ignorant fools through...



Right after a good ol' bowl of Frosted Flakes! There GRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAT! :O



~Wigwam
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

29-Mar-2009 10:11:45

Seph
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Hmm, I agree with Fik about the last chapter. I got that same impression when I read that chapter.



Ok, now I want my money! What do you mean you were just being sarcastic?!

----

Also, I've been thinking-


*Random jogging guy jogs by window and starts jogging in place*


Guy: Your thinking?! Thats dangerous, ya know! dangerous for you, at least...


Wigwam: Ok, how do you know my name and how the hell did you know that my cousin likes waffles!?


Guy: But-


*Gets blasted by giant beam of maple syrup*





W!G|W@M'$ !N$@NE $H0RT$




---

Kid: Mommy, look- I can ride my bike in the street without my training-


*SCCCRRRREEEEAAACCCCHHHH-THUD!!!*

---

Guy: Haha, I've watched all of the Mel's brooks films 500000000000000 times and it never gets old! Its so funny, i've not even taken breaks in between movies! I haven't slept in at least two weeks! No, i'm fine! I stay awake with redbull! REDBULL! RRREEEEEDDDBBBUUUULLLL!!!!!


---


Lord Helmet: Their escaping - catch them!


Kernal Sanders: Yes sir! *Into Mic* Perpare ship for lightspeed!


Lord helmet: No,no! Lightspeed's too slow-


Kernal Sanders: Lightspeed too slow!?


Lord Helmet: Yes, we're gonna have to go right to.. Ludacrius Speed!


*Gasps from crowd*

Kernal Sanders: Ludacrius speed - but sir, we've never gone that fast before! I'm not sure this ship could take it-


Lord Helmet: Whats the matter, Kernal Sanders-Chicken?!



Sanders: Pre-prepare ship-for Ludacrius Speed! Fasten all seatbelts, Secure all exits, close the giftshop, Cancel the Three-ring circus, Secure all animals in the zoo-


Helmet:Gimme thay, ya petty excuse for an officer! Now hear this: Ludacruis speed-


Sanders: Sir, should't you bucle up?


Helmet: Aw buckle this! Ludacruis speed, go!


*BBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM!*



Helmet: Ahhhhh!!!!! What have I done!??! MY....Brains...are...going..into...my feet...



*Engine fails and Helmet is flung ito front of ship*


Sanders: You ok?


Helmet:...Yea...*THUD!*


~Wigwam
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

30-Mar-2009 09:28:25

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I just have to say one thing. I apologize for the next chapter for taking longer than it should. I've just haven't had both time nor mood in order to type a full chapter. Hopefully, tomorrow will be when I do start typing since I'll have plenty of time that day.

*UPDATE*: Lately now, I've just haven't been feeling perfect. So, I hope you can understand my excuse and be patient. For this, I might throw in a another chapter when I do feel better (which hopefully will be a few days, tomorrow or the weekend.)

Thank you for understanding :) ,
~Biomaster7
The end
is only
the beginning...

31-Mar-2009 17:25:00 - Last edited on 02-Apr-2009 15:50:23 by Serene End

Seph
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Seph

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Well, maybe its about time to lay down the pen for a little bit. Well, rather lay down the keyboard.



Perhaps just writers' block. Maybe its that you're out of inspiration.



Besides, unless you're aiming for a multi-story series with the same storyline and cast, it's hard to make a sequel with new characters, even harder to tie that storyline with your first story.



Well, if you do need a break from this whole thing, no need to worry about this thread, nor your others. I'm going to be here a while and posting the word "bump" on a thread or three won't kill me.


~Wigwam
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

02-Apr-2009 21:54:28 - Last edited on 02-Apr-2009 21:55:06 by Seph

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Noooooooo! I'm not suffering from the evil dreadful Writer's Block! I've just haven't been feeling great, a little sick is all. But, I'm feeling a lot better than I was early today. And I've typed at least one full chapter (can't really post it right now because I'm not on the computer that I have it saved on). But just wait one more day. I promise I'll have two chapters ready to read as soon as I'm done typing tomorrow!

P.S: I can never run out of inspiration! My mom doesn't call me "creative" for nothin'! :P

~Biomaster7
The end
is only
the beginning...

02-Apr-2009 22:04:21 - Last edited on 03-Apr-2009 00:15:01 by Serene End

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You know what. Since I'm back on my normal computer. I've had enough, I'm just going to post the next chapter right now. Chapter 9 will follow Chapter 8 tomorrow.

(I'm mostly giving this warning just to start the next page ;) )

~Biomaster7
The end
is only
the beginning...

03-Apr-2009 00:14:51

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