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Parakarry267

Parakarry267

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Hey, I actually read this all the way through.
I completely forgot that Squidward would be the most likely one to have Sponge(Bob) killed! That's crazy! :O
It's kinda short. One of my favorite parts was where you tied in the RS elements. :P That was funny. I also like Zach's suit; that's a pretty cool (if not somewhat unrealistic) piece of equipment there.
All in all, this was a pretty good story. Not bad, Zachy. Not bad.

24-Jun-2008 21:01:02 - Last edited on 24-Jun-2008 21:01:37 by Parakarry267

Narcisi

Narcisi

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Para! Good to see you. :]
I guess you're right concerning the length.
I can't believe how long it's been since I've written this; I've improved in areas, such as my writing skill and speed, and along with a stronger dedication and perseverance with longer writings, I think it's due time I write a new story for this place.
Great to have you come by here. I appreciate the compliments. :0

@Turk = Thanks for the bump!

30-Jun-2008 12:41:29 - Last edited on 30-Jun-2008 12:41:48 by Narcisi

[#IIVF27O4G]

[#IIVF27O4G]

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:O Sponge(bob), whoa. Bookmark.
From what I read (the first few posts), I'm loving it. Gotta finish it though. ^_^
Profile post.
I like this a lot, its fun but it still keeps the seriousness of an action story. I'm gonna finish this later when I'm more awake.
Good job, Gamefreak.

03-Jul-2008 13:50:00 - Last edited on 03-Jul-2008 14:22:18 by [#IIVF27O4G]

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