Here you go:
Hey Game. I hath arrived at your pinnaple of uber depths to give you your review from The New Age Writers (Who pwn.).
Voice & Emotion: 84/100
Pretty good, I could feel the sense of urgency everywhere. The things I had a problem with were, believe it or not, the Sponge*** cgaracters. You kinda overdid them a little, in my opinion. But everything else was good.
Originality: 100/100
Sorry, I have no choice but to give you this mark. *was a brilliant idea to make a corny TV show for younglings into an uber, present-day A/A.
Description: 94/100
Very nice. Some of the underwater scenes were the only slightly under-described parts, so kudos on that.
Mechanics: 95/100
This was also great, the whole thing was smooth, the transition from viewpoint to viewpoint was excellent.
Characters: 93/100
Very realistic, the characters really came to life. One small problem was that this whole experience left their personalities, somewhat, unchangedish. I dont know how to say this, just it felt a little like the end didnt happen at the personality level.
Plot: 94/100
Assassin assassinates the target for assassination. Kills all opposition while being hunted by FBI. Would have been an epic failure if Squidward hadnt hired him. Just kidding.
Overall: 560/600
Notes: I think this is a hilarious story in which the A/A and plot is suprisingly good. The only thing you need to work on is...Codename Zach: Episode Five. I eagerly await it. You have earned the rank of Ink Maestro, with your incredibly uber tale of sponge, squirell, squid, starfish, assassin and FBI peeps.
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22-May-2008 02:16:21
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