originality10/10 very original nobody wouls've thought ofusing a cop as the monster in a horror story
creativity10/10 using things like vflashbacks and a crazy cop
scariness9/10 very very scary ,but you should've kept the crazy cop in the whole story
average 97%
overally kyle i say excellent work like kool said great writing style
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