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Koolchicken1

Koolchicken1

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Originality: 95%
Creativity: 95%
Literature: 100%
Personal: 95%
Scariness: 95%
TOTAL: 96%
Comment: writing style, brilliant as before, you have an AMAZING score!

i see what you mean about it being scarier. i myself am claustrophobic, if i was trapped in a car in the first minute i would have fainted from panic

i'm not sure if i'll ever give a score higher than that!

07-Jun-2009 17:17:48

Tava60

Tava60

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Now kyle I need to give you a piece of my mind, you just leave the "The word" and dont even bye! I do alot better at agility coures when i'm talking to someone, and nope you left and no one got back on!

Anyways now that i'm over yelling at someone because the agility i was at hates me, I'd like to say. Good job, you have someone wanting to review you that is what i call talent :)

08-Jun-2009 15:36:09

17dragon92

17dragon92

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originality10/10 very original nobody wouls've thought ofusing a cop as the monster in a horror story
creativity10/10 using things like vflashbacks and a crazy cop
scariness9/10 very very scary ,but you should've kept the crazy cop in the whole story
average 97%
overally kyle i say excellent work like kool said great writing style

08-Jun-2009 15:41:15 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2009 15:43:06 by 17dragon92

Dark Enmity

Dark Enmity

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Thank you to both. I guess my next stories are going to have to be scarier if I want to do better. No matter, I love to improve. :)

Tava, I am so sorry. :( I felt really bad after I did it and being a rush is no excuse for not even saying goodbye. I guess I kind of lost my head that day. O_o I will make it up to you with this next story I am writing. O_o I would reveal the title but it needs a characters last name in it which I haven't decided (Which means I have not had the chance to open up a phone book—yes I do that, deal with it).

P.S. I wouldn't say Dragon was 'waiting' to review on my thread. I applied a couple days earlier but he did only comedies. So once he switched to marking all genres he said he would do the review I originally asked. It was more like I was begging!

08-Jun-2009 23:02:20 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2009 23:06:46 by Dark Enmity

Tava60

Tava60

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Now Kyle when i compliment you, you take it and don't get technical. :P

Also i was more of venting my feelings at the only person who was involved somewhat at the time, i mean i was comparing you to the goodness of Pie and you never answer.

Oh well just got mad cause i failed a level 1 obstectle like 5 times and kept failing getting tickets. Well hope the next story is really good :)

09-Jun-2009 01:49:41

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