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You broke up my chapter! :O

Hello, Crazy. It's always nice to see someone who says they know me. I hope - if you read it - that you enjoy my story!

~Reegena
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31-Aug-2010 16:25:24

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Oooh, nice so far. Ms. Thyme really ticks me off; a mean old lady to pervasively clicks her tongue. A bit of humor infused with seriousness gives this chapter a good atmosphere. Please, write more, I'm looking forwards to it.

31-Aug-2010 16:32:56

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I was, originally, going to put this on the first post, but after I re-wrote it, there wasn't any room. I've decided to post and hope people read it...Even though they won't.

Starting in a few weeks, I'm going to be very, very busy. I'll have something going on almost every day after school, if not every day.

When it comes to adding chapters, except at least three a week. I'm making a goal of it. Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Sundays. I have the least amount of stuff going on those days.

At the moment, though, it seems that I've misplaced my notebook. I write out each chapter in a handy-dandy blue composition book before typing it. My writing improves that way. I have a chapter ready when I find it!

~Reegena
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06-Sep-2010 01:40:49

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Chapter 14

When Rosie left the dress shop, clad in a new silk scarf and carrying a new dress, she was utterly distraught over the news of another murder.

"Another one?" she said. "A guard this time? Alex, we aren't safe anymore," she placed a hand over her mouth. "Oh, Alex. I feel sick."

Alex had assumed, of course it was obvious, that Elizabeth had committed the newest murder. When Rosie said that they weren't safe, did that mean she didn't believe Elizabeth did it, or she didn't feel safe around her? Alex frowned. Did Rosie ever know about their boss' little "hobby"? It didn't seem like the kind of knowledge Rosie could live with and keep secret.

"Rosie?"

"Yes?"

He asked, "Do you have any idea who might have done it?"

She looked at him, her confusion evident in her facial expression. "The paper said it was the Ardougne Assassin. I assume it's him."

Alex frowned. So Rosie didn't know. Now, he wondered who did. Obviously, Rhody knew about Elizabeth's "hobby", but whas he the only one? What about Lillian, Violet, and Charles? Certainly Elizabeth couldn't hide it from her own husband.

Could she?

"Excuse me, Mister?" Alex was tapped on the shoulder. He turned to see a young boy, ten or eleven, standing behind him. He wore tattered rags, coated with dirt. His face was stained with grime. Even though the boy was young, his chapped lips and faded blue eyes gave him an aura of worry and pain. The street was no place for a little boy to live. "Mister, can you spare a gold peice or two? I wanna buy some bread from the store, here. I ain't eaten in a long time. My tummy hurts a bit."

06-Sep-2010 16:50:50

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