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Tirent dove aside as a white fist slammed into the ground where he stood before. He ripped his swords from their sheaths and turned around to face the yeti. Zephy had just pummeled it with a number of flaming projectiles, sending it staggering backward, and finally toppling down with a boom, and a flurry of snow. Tirent lit his swords on fire and launched himself onto the grounded yeti, who again roared angrily. Tirent landed on its stomach, driving both flaming swords into the yeti's chest. The creature screamed with pain, then shook violently -almost sending Tirent flying over the edge of the cliff in the process-, then went limp.
Meanwhile, Sorak was dodging a series of swipes from a yeti's humongous claws. The yeti had him pushed against the cliff, when suddenly Jarrid leapt from the side of the cliff where he had climbed to, onto the yeti's back, stabbing it repeatedly. The yeti roared and tried to reach back and grab Jarrid off his back. Sorak saw his opportunity and slashed at the yeti's stomach. Finally, the second yeti had been downed. The final yeti let loose a ear splitting screech as it saw that it had lost its comrades, and rushed at the travelers.

04-Feb-2012 03:26:00

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The yeti first reached Jarrid and batted him against the cliff. Jarrid gasped and fell down in a heap of snow. Tirent again launched a volley of fire at the monster, and Zephy added with his own arrows. The yeti staggered, covered with arrows and burn marks. Sorak jumped and kicked the stunned yeti in the chest. Though by itself the impact wouldn't have been enough to topple a yeti, after the abuse from Tirent and Zephy, the yeti toppled and fell off the edge of the cliff. A final resounding roar faded into the distance.
Zephy snorted, "Chill bro.."
Tirent, and Sorak laughed with him, relieved to get out that fight relatively unscathed, Jarrid just grinned. The group decided that they had had enough for one day and set up camp in the middle of the bodies of the two dead yetis. Jarrid had just bruised his arm, but maybe broken a rib. He was wrapped up with some bandages and sent to sit by the fire they had made. His only words about the wound were,
"Well, at least I don't have to ice it"


There ya go! chapter 20! :) I plan on rewriting the first 'book' of this story soon. It will be very thorough, adding new scenes, maybe even new chapters entirely. names will be changed, plot might be tweaked... we'll see, then book two will be updated in accordance. It'll be a quite a while till thats ready though. I plan on doing it all in word before I put it up so maybe a new thread entirely? ...we shall see :D

04-Feb-2012 03:29:32 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2012 03:57:46 by Beep282

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