very nice, although the thought of azzandra and nex is kind of..er...yea.
you should continue, you have huge potential as a writer, as i've told you so many times in the chat.
Very terse and poignant =) What tension, emotion, and wistfulness you place in such a small scene-- brilliantly done. I can actually see this in an actual quest, it'd be a very gripping and moving cutscene
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@ Freolin
It would.
A nice break from the inevitable intense battles and conflict coming this way soon.
Great work Kitty
I'm still suprised, you being a Saradominist and all, writing a new side of Zarosians.
You can only fully appreciate a story when you experience it through the eyes of one of its characters.
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Robo Hobo
You have a way with words near-unmatched in mortal realms, Kitty.
I was truly moved...
And honestly, when I walked in, I expected a wall of text, but it didn't need that... You are amazing in this area... Literature.
397 thumbs up!
~~Wachi