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Sliske

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Awh, a very sweet, nice tale, very touching, I love it

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Everyone dies.

Master of the Shadow Realm

13-Jan-2011 18:43:10 - Last edited on 13-Dec-2013 22:02:36 by Sliske

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Warrior Lady

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Very nice Kitty. You are a very good writer

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13-Jan-2011 19:43:25

Ivequitosrs

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very nice story man!

13-Jan-2011 19:51:30

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Not a big fan of slash in any form, but this works out well.

...At least if you ignore the interspecies thing.

"Let us bring terror and pain to the small races!"
-Sakirth

13-Jan-2011 21:41:39

Freolin

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Robo - yes now that I think of it it would relieve the monotony of... you know, the Ritual...the Stone of Jas...the fights to the death between near-divine beings...the apotheosis of Lucien....the boring stuff.
Seriously though, it would add a very good complexity to the Mahjarrat storyline...though I doubt it will happen between Azzanadra and Nex, due to Nex being a boss monster and all

14-Jan-2011 02:18:43

Tryfe

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Hawt.

14-Jan-2011 10:43:59

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SilentStorm

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Very nice story Kitty, and very well written. =) Could it really be? Only time well tell.

EDIT: You should work at Jagex, rewrite every single conversation which has emotions/love etc.. Since you're a one hell of a writer =) That would make quests way more epic!

14-Jan-2011 11:44:11 - Last edited on 21-Jan-2011 14:00:18 by SilentStorm

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sexy jordo

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short and simple, yet very deep.

i like it, i like it alot =D

14-Jan-2011 13:11:53

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Yanami

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Very nice, my good friend. I hope there are more stories of your makings to be created by such a writer as you.

(Sarp's Dog)
(Worshiper of Armadyl)

14-Jan-2011 13:29:09

Lacey72

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I also thought it is a nice vignette. Your sentences have a nice flow to them, but their short length gives the story a light and faster feel that might not carry through darker passages. The human (my assumption) character could have shown more conflicting emotion as she was departing a creature that she loved, but knew she could never have.
Is this a story that we will see more of in installments?

14-Jan-2011 16:09:49

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