Bump.
That was... touching. It gave me the oogies. So yes, great story (I'd expected 3 pages or something, but this does just as well - amazing how you are able to put so many oogies in these few words), makes you wonder whatever happened to Nex. My compliments!
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Very nice story! It makes me wish I had paid more attention to the lore that is actually within the game, as well as hope that lore isn't as neglected as it once was.
This is fairly deep tbh. A mix of Zarosian loyalties being shown and 2 big personalities from the Zarosian side. I love how Nex is not brought across as an animal but as an intelligent being as it should be.
The fact Kitty used a few words mentioned by Jagex to create this is amazing. I also like the fact the personalities are fairly unexpected until you hear the name.
I actually love how deep this story goes despite it disagreeing with what I would assume about the actual lore.
Awesome work. You need to write more
Are you SERIOUS? I LOVEEEEEDDDD that pairing since Nex came out!
This story is amazing. Wonderful. Marvelous. Epic. Awesome. I approve.
Zaros would approve, too. In fact, I bet that once Zaros is back and running the world, the first thing he's gonna do is get them married!
The word "Angel", of course gives out that it is Nex- very good!
Most people would not dare imagine them as lovers, or capable of love at all, but this pairing is really awesome if people come across to realising how important both Azzanadra and Nex are in the army of Zaros. The connection... it just MUST be made! Y'know what I mean?
Anyway, I like the choice of showing the softer side of mighty warriors.
It was short and to the point, but I feel that it's not enough somehow....
After all, you give an open ending. Hm.... What can be done about this....
I know! Write a sequel!
Please please pleaseee?
Better than twlight?
Lol, never mind, I don't wanna bring those things up...
I loved your little story Kitty. It seemed nice and lovely.
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Bombi Drop
Interesting thought. Sorry it took me so long to reply, I forgot the story's name (a). Anyway, this is very nice. It's touching, albeit a bit short. This might be an annoying habit of mine, but do you mind if I wrote this again in my style? Not to correct you or anything, I just like doing it.
You've definitely got a good idea here though, original and refreshing. Kinda sorry it's so short, I want more, but it's best to have a bit of the good stuff to leave you wanting