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Roshinda

Roshinda

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Mm, overworked and tired, but otherwise well. At least work isn't stressing me outany more with the knowledge that I'm leaving in 2 weeks.
I'm going to take the rest of the summer off and write, which had been my intention all along. But at least I'll have made a cocuple thousand dollars from it.

25-Jul-2007 17:29:02

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Yeah, it could really be expanded into a full story. Maybe start out right before Tobi leaves and go from there, adding in more detail and explaining their lives from that point. As for the ending, I wouldn't go any further; it's a good way to end a story already.
By the way, a little note: You had me scared when Lara's part first started and I thought Tobi was another guy. I was thinking, "Oh ouch..." until I figured out that Tobi was the guy's name. :P

26-Jul-2007 08:39:50

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