He strolled briskly out of the room. Abu stepped aside and let him through. The room was quiet for several moments before Abu waved his hands, “Unbind him,” he ordered, “and find him a doctor.”
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Smok Taunter
i don't understand why you used the name "Abu Bakr". I am very sorry, i did not really read your story, but i hope you know that Abu Bakr was a person long ago , and known to be a friend
of the Prophet Muhammad. He is a very important person in Islam. Maybe you did not know this, but please do not go throwing the name around on fictional characters.
Prior to writting this story I did not know who he was. It was one of my admirals names in ME2:TW, so I kind of pulled it from there. As for thr physical character I intend to have him act at the level of chivalry and honor as Saladin. So it's not a total "disgrace".
But at this point it's stuck.