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Mean Bean567

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Little complicated, basically I'm tired of people expecting things from me and then not being happy about how I do it. Enough ranting though. I haven't written a new chapter due to the fact I'm trying to draw up a map of this world I have created. Once I have finished I will post the next chapter.

02-Mar-2011 16:22:32

Mean Bean567

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Oh sorry about the miss understanding. No one here made me angry. It was an adult I know in real life who made me angry. I have finished the map and will post a new chapter tonight if I have the time. (My internet shuts off soon.)

03-Mar-2011 03:27:20 - Last edited on 03-Mar-2011 14:51:54 by Mean Bean567

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Chapter 16
Eldarin
Mathew found himself and his three companions riding horses on the west highway to the capital of Idlan, Eldarin. Santhari was flying somewhere of to the north with exuberant glee.
Mathew fingered the small necklace around his neck. It was a small silver medallion on a leather thong. Engraved into the medal was a ne tang and staff crossing each other. Each of them was given one by Leader Niona before leaving the city.
Leader Niona, Trimen and Nate had been waiting for them at the edge of the city. Mathew hadn't seen Nate in a while. He occasionally had been in the main city, but most of the time was gone on one mission or another. He was standing decidedly close to Leader Niona, as he always did when in the city.
Santhari flew closer and then landed and walked beside them. The horses, having been around her many times before, were not bothered by the sight of the gigantic beast.
"Mathew", came Mark's voice,"There are riders up ahead." Mathew replied without bothering to look,"We are on the great highway Mark. Of course their will be other riders." Sounding defensive Mark answered,"Thats not what I mean. I don't think others will be used to the sight of a dragon and will probably freak out."
"Is there something wrong with my form", came Santhari's thoughts in Mathew's mind. His reply was instant,"No, we are simply worried that you will scare them." She seemed to think for a while and then replied,"If it is a problem then I will fix it." Suddenly here body started to shimmer and then in her place stood a small girl. A very n@ked, little girl. Mathew and Mark both spun their horses around, red faced, Sifo Dias didn't seem to notice. Cassiel laughed slightly then dismounted. Mathew could hear the sound of a cloak being taken from a pack and then heard Cassiel say,"You two can look now." The little girl looked like a human but was slightly strange. (not finished)

03-Mar-2011 15:49:41 - Last edited on 03-Mar-2011 16:23:43 by Mean Bean567

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Her skin seemed slightly scalish and when she opened her mouth, Mathew could see two fangs. "Better", thought Santhari. Mathew thought back,"You can change forms? You didn't think to tell me this.""You didn't ask", came her smug remark.
"It seems our companion has some tricks up her sleeves", Cassiel remarked. "But we will have to get her some clothes in the next village, my coat is way to big for her." Mathew looked and noticed that the coat dragged on the ground behind Santhari and the sleeves went way past her hands. "Great. For now I guess you should ride with me", Mathew announced. Santhari laughed and then thought,"I will not ride on a stupid animal like that. It wouldn't even be able to hold my weight if I did."
Mathew thought back,"Your a little girl, of course it can carry you." Her thoughts back were completely serious, void of all the childlike playing they usually held,"Don't forget that I am a dragon Mathew. My mass stays with me even when I change." "We need to get going Mathew", came Mark's little voice. "Fine let us go", Mathew said out loud.
They urged their horses forward and heard a then heard a thud. Mathew looked back to see Santhari laying on the ground. Hurt and embarrassed, Santhari's thoughts came to his mind,"How do you walk with two legs?" Mathew dismounted and spent the next ten minutes teaching Santhari how to walk.
(end of chapter)

03-Mar-2011 16:36:21

Mean Bean567

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Just so everyone is aware. Bentarin is in the Idlan region, with the capital being Eldarin. (Yeah I know I'm bad at naming things. Currently There are 6 regions on the map with more room to the west and south. Further west and south doesn't matter right now though. I have named five of the regions and one city. If you would like to suggest a city name or a region name feel free to. (I hate naming things). If I don't get suggestions then I will simply name them as needed. Remember that this is just names nothing more.

Edit- If your wondering why I had to use an @ sign up there. It is because they wouldn't let me say that word but it was important for the story.

03-Mar-2011 16:40:08 - Last edited on 03-Mar-2011 16:41:31 by Mean Bean567

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