That sure was a weak defense, Roshie XD AND NO CAPITAL ERRORS! GAH! Yes, I really am uptight, aren't I?
I'll keep doing what I'm doing. It's fun. Also, I find I'm checking on this thread more than mine XD
*Wais*
My actual defense for last night is I got home from work late and then had some really creepy/scary experiences, so after planning stage there was no time left for writing.
I'll get more done tonight 'cause I'm skipping something important I should be doing.
Well, I added another post for now. More to come soon. I promise to finish the chapter tonight at least.
P.S. The new addition starts on the same post as the last one.
the rest of the day>,< In the morning,
Fullstop, eh?
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Well, you're getting less errors XD I like it.
What happened to Ava? Damsel in distress? Valiant prince awaiting? Only the next exciting episode will tell!
But yeah, I liked it. Straight into the action, in a way.
Two more adds for tonight, again starting on the same post as the previous one ended.
I hope it doesn't cause confusion, but it saves space.
I didn't finish the chapter as promised, but at least it's another something to keep you all (and by all I mean just DS so far) content.
If you see any errors (as I'm sure you will) please point them out nicely ;p
NOO!!! I CAN'T FIND ANY ERRORS!
*Sob* I've failed Roshie... failed!
Anyways, I liked the adds. Can I feel a little... roughage sport coming on? I think I can! Woo! And I love how the men are in power. Totally just like real life! (Jokes)
Keep it up, I'll keep popping around.
Thanks DS. I saw you had last post and I was thinking "Nooooo I failed, I overlooked something again" but I see that I win!
I'm sure your keen eye will be needed again many times over though.