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Chapter 7: Descry (this one might be a shorty.)

Day turned into night in the desert. During the day, there was a battle between two opposing forces. One, a young man who believes in his own justice. And two, a man who is the lord of all crimes in the golden sand desert. Both were earnest about killing the other, glancing down each other across their battlefield. Or perhaps their grave.

But as they fought, the sun went down on them, and Lakos was ready to attack with full force. He transformed into a werewolf, evincing his true colors. Joshua readied himself for a battle he had never fought. The desert night is surrounded by a frighten howl, people outside scrambled into their houses for a sense of security.

Joshua alone stood before his enemy. He dug his foot into the sand and spreads his legs slightly apart. He was ready for anything. Lakos charged at Joshua with incredible speed. When he was close enough to attack, he swings his two large claws randomly at where Joshua was standing. The snow white haired young man backflips to dodge the vicious attack.

Joshua pointed his sword at the werewolf and rapidly shot Fire Wave after Fire Wave at his enemy. It seemed as if the werewolf was not affected at all. He charged at Joshua and slashed his deadly right claw at him. Joshua quickly dropped to the ground, and continued to shoot his Fire Waves at Lakos. Did he not understand it wasn't working?

Lakos picks Joshua off the ground and hurled him to the wall of the nearest building. Joshua's back smacks the stone wall hard, his head whiplashes. Lakos darts over to Joshua and thrusts his left claw at Joshua's neck. The young man rolled to the left side, dodging the attack. Lakos' claw got stuck in the wall. He struggled, trying to free his claw.
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Joshua charged over, and swings his sword at the werewolf's back. Lakos pushes Joshua away with all his might with his free right arm. Joshua flies twenty feet before hitting the ground. His body rolls over from his front to his back on impact. Joshua quickly jumps to his feet, awaiting Lakos' next move. The werewolf finally frees his left claw and prepares himself for the next attack.

The werewolf prepares, and so does the human. Lakos hasted over to Joshua, and then swings them violently once near him. Joshua rolls away. But then Lakos picks up at giant rock and shoots it at Joshua. He tries to block, but his sword is thrown out of his hand. And lands several feet away. Joshua looks behind him and acknowledges this fact.

He hasted as fast as he could to his missing blade. But Lakos jumps into the air and lands right in-front of the young man. Not expecting it, Joshua hesitates in his step. Lakos slashes his claws down upon Joshua, who blocks with his bare arms. His arms take the blow, getting all cut up. Lakos then hurls Joshua away.

Joshua lands on the golden sand on his back. The blood from the slash wounds on his forearms dripped down to the sand, tainting it red. He quickly jumped back to his feet a moment after hitting the ground. Raising his right hand, he prepared himself to say something, "It's time your transgressions end." mumbled Joshua. "I never wanted to use this. But you leave me little choice."

Lakos readied his claws and showed his teeth, as sharp and large as they were. Joshua closed his eyes and sighed.

"Come unto me, indignation of the gods. Empty your powers and let your servant become your righteous hand." he began to chant. Lakos charged at Joshua, knowing whatever he was doing could prove dangerous. The closer the werewolf got, the faster Joshua chanted. "Darkness will be dispelled, evil will be no more. The immoral iniquity will be destroyed after your final breath!"
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Lakos was right in-front of Joshua when a radiant light blanketed him, blinding the werewolf's sensitive eyes. The light blasts Lakos several feet before he hits the sand. The shine lit up the night like a flashlight in the dark. Twenty seconds later, the aqua blue light fades away. Lakos glances back at Joshua. The werewolf notices Joshua's right arm was glowing aqua blue, the same color as the light that surrounded him. Lakos knew this was not a good thing.

Joshua cracked his knuckles, bearing a serious expression on his face. He then looks at Lakos and readies himself. "Sorry to keep you waiting," he said, "but you'll wait no longer for your death approaches."

In Il Pagato, the assassins there were playing cards, gambling of course at a local bar. They were laughing and joking around, but one of them looked very careful, watchful, nervously scanning his eyes anywhere he saw people. The windows, the door, everywhere. His assassin comrades noticed this problem. He was across the table, the further chair from the door leading outside.

"Hey Ricky," one of the assassin said his name, "ya alright? Ya look like ya just wakin' up from a nightmare."

Ricky looked at the assassin who asked the question. "I-I'm fine." he said with fountain of sweat dripping down his forehead.

Another assassin looked at Ricky the same way the other assassin did, in concern. "Ya sure?" he asked.

"Yeah! Yeah!"

A young woman approached the table, "Excuse me," she said, "by any chances would one of you be Rick?"

One of assassins pointed to Ricky. "He is." the assassin pointed out.

Rick shook his head frantically with widened eyes. "N-N-No I'm not!" denying his very existence. "I'm not Rick! I-I-I'm...-"

The woman smacks the table away, took a step forward, and pointed her rapier at Ricky's throat. Several of the assassin fall over. A gasp took the breath of all the people in the bar. "I heard you know something about Sarah Wolfsbane."
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"Y-Yeah! B-B-But who doesn't, right?" he tried to smile, but he was too terrified. His body frozen in place, he could barely breathe. "W-W-Why do ya ask?"

"She is my target." her azure blue eyes glanced down upon Ricky. "Where is she?"

"It's that bloody vampyre!" one of the assassins shouted.

Ricky knew who it was. He had been awaiting her arrival, which was the cause of his watchful observation. "She's livin' at the capital! And ya don't have ta worry about her brother. He became an Assassin." he mumbled, softly.

"Is that so?" a slight smile grew on the vampyre's face. "That's all I need from you. You may die now."

"W-Wait!" When she swings her rapier, it stops right before it cuts into Ricky's throat. Her eyes glanced back at the Ricky, who's heart skipped a beat. Her eyes didn't look bloodthirsty, instead her eyes looked kind and gentle. "Sorry." she apologized, her voice sounding less angry but rather remorseful. She sheathed her rapier and turned around.

She walked away afterwards, leaving behind quite a scene. "Why did you do that?!" growled a angry voice in the vampyre's head.

"Because that man didn't deserve to die." the gentle vampyre replied.

"All the people in that bar deserved to die." The vampyre leaves Il Pagato, on the journey to the capital of the Holy Kingdom in search for her target, the one that has been chosen to die by a blade.

The End of Chapter 7
Next Chapter,
Chapter 8: Vigorous

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it ^_^

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(short chapters fail. -.-)
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15-Oct-2009 23:04:38

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It doesn't matter by level or power, but by strategy. Plus, being the heir doesn't mean he's like the same as his father. >=]

Also, I only made her a juvinate because a vyrewatch would seem kinda godmodish. Same with the normal weapon part. I mean, a vyrewatch needs that flail to actually hit it. Know where I'm going with this part?

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Now... HOORAY! SHE MADE HER APPEARANCE! That's perfect! You captured what I thought about her. I should of added that the good side is Icyene, without the wings, though. But, you got it. XD

15-Oct-2009 23:28:00

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Yeah, that would NOT be fun to do. -.-

And hallelujah! I got it right! ^_^

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15-Oct-2009 23:33:12

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Well I just finished chapter eleven, do you think yuo could check on my story? I think that was the longest chapter i have made so far. Part two is in the same folder a part one. I am making them in one big story since part one was only ten chapters long. My thanks~

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16-Oct-2009 00:33:35

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I find it amazing how quickly you can make a chapter, this morning I checked and you were not working on a chapter, It is now 9:00 and my dad still has not arrived with the pizza. Your shortest chapters are as long as my longest chapters. I make sure now that my chapters have at least three posts. I make a new chapter a week, where as you make about four a week. You should grow up as an author. Have you already decided your pename?

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16-Oct-2009 00:37:45

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