I love this.
It gives the impression (and don't take this the wrong way at all) like a string of thoughts by an autistic person. The insecurities and simple naive sentences surrounded by a jumble of deep insightful, meaningful and complex phrases and words.
I read a book a few years ago, The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by the writer Mark Haddon. Your work really is very similar to the idea this book portrays. Its a diary of an autistic child, and it is written on how he thinks, it really is a very interesting read. That book won quite a few book awards, and your writing definitely has the same feel about it.
15-Nov-2011 18:25:19