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You know how much I love your comments Dream . And this is no exception! I've peeked into your funny mind quite a bit too, so don't feel so bad! Hopefully, I'll add to this story so you can read some more, aye?
Anyways, have a good night's sleep! Hope you don't feel so groggy in the morning!

08-Jan-2011 07:33:15 - Last edited on 08-Jan-2011 07:52:15 by Nguy4

15-Feb-2011 04:44:18

This really is a brilliant idea. You're very insightful on even the most mundane of day-to-day topics, giving a very logical, under the nose type of look at plain activities. By the comments, I think its simplicity has caught a few people off-guard, but the complexity of the thought you put into writing this is truly underestimated. I've read this before and for some reason I didn't post back then, but I still feel the same way about it then as I do now. Very brilliant idea and an original concept in writing it out in short lines.
I feel like I may have over-thought your story. Hopefully you were really intending to have the sort of effect that I see in it. If not, I suppose I'm praising a child painter.

30-Apr-2011 09:56:28

Thank you for posting Hudsonstorm!
It really means alot to me when people post on my work. Personally, it makes writing worth while .
Yes, I'm really falling in love with this style of writing. It's rather poignant and haunting, I believe. Plus, it's very liberating. I don't have to bother with a story line and get flustered. I just have to write what comes to me :p.
I've had some of these thoughts floating in my head for a while, so I do have some serious intent behind my writing in this particular work. So the over thinking is warranted I suppose, but don't be boggled by it :p. What were some of your thoughts by the way?
And yes, I guess it is hard to differentiate between mindless drivel and a Pollock .
But anyways, I'm really happy you posted and I'm flattered by your compliments.

07-May-2011 03:37:51 - Last edited on 07-May-2011 21:30:50 by Nguy4

08-May-2011 12:22:16

08-May-2011 20:13:27 - Last edited on 08-May-2011 20:14:34 by Nguy4

10-May-2011 04:17:04

Thank you for the kind words, Yrolg!
It really means alot coming from you .
It would be complete honor if you gave me feedback, Yrolg! I'm actually incredibly interested in how you would review this :p.

11-May-2011 02:34:28 - Last edited on 11-May-2011 02:34:51 by Nguy4

Hmm... I could have sworn alot was the British spelling. I guess my childhood memory has tricked me yet again :p
I'm not sure if I want to it change because of sentimental reasons . We'll see.

14-May-2011 03:06:55