Imo I thought the story was too short. The last act really came out of nowhere, considering the pace it was going. Either it should have been 2-3 times longer, or the pace much quicker.
Otherwise, I greatly enjoyed the story. The writing of course was excellent. As for the quest captions, it would be nice if you complied them, but it would definitely take up quite a lot of forum posts. Perhaps an abridged version would suffice?
Anyways, now that the diary is finished and GQM will soon be as well, do we get any Ana Meken merchandise? Let's pull off a Power to the Lore-Forumers, and vote between Ana-Meken "You-can-do-it!" T-shirts, and Ana Meken+Amascut bobble heads. First 10 orders get 3 bonus chapters and a plush brown cavalier.
I'm too Unaligned to have a forum signature.
11-Feb-2014 20:19:02