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Borna Coric

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Veran and Level! Hooray! :D

Level, thank you for your entry. Did you ever win a contest of mine before? I am trying to find the winners...I believe you did...

EDIT: Would some people prefer me to post some type of review of their story or keep it private?

05-Jun-2011 22:29:30 - Last edited on 05-Jun-2011 22:31:09 by Borna Coric

97swiftarm

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One word - so sweet yet so sour. Knowing that they won’t be in your life after this is a comfort, but one that doesn’t quite dull the pain. That pain still worms its way inside you, twisting and turning till that frightful word resides in a place you hold dear. That word - it pops up at everything, as everything reminds you of her. The sweet lilies in the field remind you of how she smelt late at night. The warm embrace of the sun reminds you of how she used to snuggle close. The tantalising touch of a leaf on your cheek reminds you of how her lips used to feel. These things remind you and that word rears its unsightly-beautiful head.

Do you remember how you used to sit and laugh together? Well, no more. You sit and wait, hoping that the silence will break itself. Do you remember how you used to stroke her hair when she dozed peacefully? Never again. You lay still, waiting for that reassuring pressure to surface. Do you remember? Of course you do. You’ll never stop to because that word rears its repulsively-exquisite head.

Bitter-sweet can’t aptly describe its feeling. It’s something more profound in the knowledge that you are now safe. It’s something more destructive knowing that you’re still just as likely to allow it to happen all again, if you can just gain that one moment where everything is perfect. It doesn’t have to last forever. In fact, you wouldn’t be satisfied with forever. You want that second where nothing else matters just so you can long for that feeling again, when things aren’t so great. That is when that word rears its disgustingly-perfect head.

06-Jun-2011 15:21:29 - Last edited on 06-Jun-2011 15:23:52 by 97swiftarm

97swiftarm

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Do you remember how you used to sit and weep? Push it aside. She sits down, her porcelain hands stroking away the fears. Do you remember how you waited for the world to fall apart around you, as your life crumbled around it? Unburden yourself. She pushes you along, helping you reach for the dreams of a broken youth. Did you forget? Of course you didn't. You’ll never forget while that word rears its wonderfully-awful head.

One action – so stinging yet so precious. Knowing that they will be there for you regardless of what happens is a relief, but one that doesn’t quite alleviate the fear. That pain is still buried deep inside you, pinching and poking everything you cherish with that one word. That word – it never leaves you, as she will never leave you. The putrid Devil’s Tongue in the wasteland remind you of how she blamed you for everything. The bitterly cold slap of wind reminds you of how she reacted to your facts of what she had done. The sharp blow to the head from a snowball reminds you of how she said that you were never the one. These things remind you and that word rears it’s delightfully-repugnant head.

That word is betrayal.

EDIT: Removed the asterisks that showed up.

06-Jun-2011 15:21:40 - Last edited on 06-Jun-2011 15:25:35 by 97swiftarm

Supreme Pac
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Supreme Pac

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Lorzan roared in glee as his bone club smashed into the side of an attacking zombie; sending it to the ground, blood and brain matter pouring from the wound.

"Catch!" he shouted to his comrade, throwing the zombies' fallen sword to him as his own weapon had been knocked out of his hand by an advancing zombie.

Horgon grabbed the sword just in time to parry a blow from his attacker. He kicked at the zombie, sending it flying into three more advancing towards him. "Why must we be doing this?" he whined, steadying himself for another wave.

"Because!" grunted Lorzan, clubbing another zombie in the head, "Zanik never did! Imagine the tales they will tell of us! Lorzan and Horgon Goblin Saviors of Varrock!"

"And imagine the tales they will tell if we die," he murmured in reply.

Once they had dispatched the remainder of the zombies the glanced up to see a new wave of zombies, all clad in ruined and cracked armor, approaching them. The pair looked at each other and grinned before charging at the approaching threat.

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After hours of endless battle the pair emerged from a sea of bodies triumphant. Lorzan dropped his club next to him and watched as Horgon searched beneath the bodies, looking for his own trusted bone spear.

"Aha!" he cried, throwing himself into a mound of bodies to retrieve the spear. Once he had resurfaced he sat down next to Lorzan.

They gazed at the carnage before them before erupting into laughter. "Oh the tales they will tell...and we survived for them to tell more!" laughed Lorzan, thumping Horgon on the back.

"Yes yes, we survived. Water?" he questioned, handing him the flask he had pulled from his sack.

Lorzan nodded, grabbing the flask and downing it in one gulp. He handed it back to Horgon, his sudden thirst quenched. Lorzan began to stand, but fell to the ground as he felt his chest tighten. He glanced down at the flask in Horgon's hands and the smirk upon his face, his eyes narrowed.

06-Jun-2011 19:15:41 - Last edited on 06-Jun-2011 22:47:48 by Supreme Pac

Supreme Pac
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"Poison," he hissed, clutching his chest, "I should have know you would do this! You who have always been jealous of my fame! Of how the ladies always want me and not you!"

He opened his mouth to say more but his body began to convulse making it impossible for him to speak without bitting his tongue off.

Mernik looked down at his convulsing figure for a moment before pulling him to his feet. "Lorzan, Horgon play time is over. Time for lunch."

"Yes Mernik," they said in unison, sitting down at the table with the rest of the goblin children.

06-Jun-2011 19:15:57 - Last edited on 06-Jun-2011 20:11:47 by Supreme Pac

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Richard was a paranoid man, and, going against the maxim of many, he kept his friends far and his enemies further. Only one man would he trust, and that was his assistant, Phillip. Through Phillip he relayed orders to his crew, and through Phillip he received information on how these orders were carried out.

But Richard was on to Phillip, and he had a feeling that treachery was on the horizon. Richard hadn’t always been such a recluse, and he felt Phillip was to blame, because he was. There was no question. It was all a clever trap to set him aside from his crew, and with one swift motion he would take Richard’s place as captain.

Unreasonable? Certainly not. Intelligent was a more accurate description of Richard’s sentiments. He was not about to walk into the traps that Phillip had set so foolishly, because he was a genius. As a genius, he would always prevail. It was simple physics, really.

“Would you like a cup of tea?” Phillip asked one day. Tea? With lunch? Phillip was making his plot painfully obvious.

“Certainly,” Richard replied smartly, playing dumb for Phillip.

Phillip, being the idiot that he was, prepared the cup of tea. He did*’t even hide the addition of poison! It was an unusual poison, in white, granulated form, but Richard knew what he was doing all along. He accepted the cup of tea, matching Phillip trick for trick.

Before taking his sip, Richard would allow Phillip one last chance to exit the situation without punishment. “Aren’t you going to have some tea?” he asked Phillip, testing him.

“Why, yes! I was just preparing your cup first. I’m getting mine right now.*

Phillip was smarter than Richard had first anticipated. It was a bump in the road—something that he had not been expecting. Richard’s heart began to race, and he could feel the perspiration gathering on his forehead. His breathing quickened and he glanced frantically around the room.

06-Jun-2011 21:31:21

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