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Borna Coric

Borna Coric

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How much extra time would you need? And it comes down to people voting you out even if you don't put in an entry, so don't worry. ;)

I just realised I accidentally posted the deadline as a week early, you have until the 13th. Sorry for the confusion!

05-Jun-2011 10:54:10 - Last edited on 05-Jun-2011 11:20:10 by Borna Coric

The Level

The Level

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Well, I suppose I'll be the first one to enter! I apologize for the posts breaking up a sentence, but it was necessary to keep it within 4,000 characters. Enjoy, and good luck to all other contestants!

Also, with permission from Leb, I edited a "did*'t" to "didn't" in the first post.

Entry below.

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05-Jun-2011 21:07:57 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2011 17:28:52 by The Level

The Level

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“Betrayal,” he murmured softly to himself. After dipping the quill he held into a bottle of ink, he absentmindedly scrawled the word onto the blank parchment in front of him.

The room in which he sat was glaringly white, as was the only furniture in the room, a wooden desk and chair in the very center of the room. A single incandescent bulb protruded from the ceiling, flickering every so often.

The man sat back in his chair, concentrating on the word he had just scratched on the paper. His gnarled hand tapped idly on the desk as he became increasingly lost in thought.

“Something interesting. Something no one has ever seen before…” he mumbled, closing his eyes.

Suddenly, there was a knock at the door.

“Charles!” a female voice said. “Teatime!”

“Come in,” Charles said flatly, turning in his chair towards the door.

The woman that entered was shockingly beautiful. Long auburn hair flowed down her snow white gown, which revealed slender, bronzed legs. His heart stirred as he traced her delicate features and slender frame with his eyes as the woman walked over to the desk and set the tea tray down. Charles could not even find the words to thank her. She smiled at him, and it was all he could do to pick up the cup she offered.

He then chuckled to himself. Charles was balding, pale, short, and slightly overweight; the idea of him ever having a wife seemed absurd.

He sniffed the liquid, reveling in the aroma of the tea. He raised an eyebrow. Sniffing the vapors thoughtfully, he detected something foreign in the substance.

“You tried to poison me,” he said to the woman. “Interesting.” He set the teacup back on the platter. No, poison would not do. It didn't have enough action in it.

“No tea today, darling?” asked the woman, chagrined by his refusal. She no longer looked so gorgeous after an attempt on his life.

"No," he said, brusquely waving his hand to dismiss her. Her face contorted as a furious anger consumed her, and a flintlock pistol appeared in

05-Jun-2011 21:08:42 - Last edited on 08-Jun-2011 17:27:33 by The Level

The Level

The Level

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her hand. Shaking with rage, she pointed the weapon at Charles.

“Typical,” he muttered as she shot him in the chest. Charles watched with disinterest as the hot blood spurt from the gaping wound and stained his white garments. As he shook his head in dismay, the wound closed, and the woman disappeared. Charles’ clothes returned to their previous immaculate state.

“Battle!” he cried suddenly, leaping from his chair. Another idea had struck him. The walls melted away, revealing a vast landscape with two armies locked in deadly combat. The sickly sweet stench of sweat and gore filled Charles’ nostrils, and the screams of dying warriors entered his ears.

Charles appeared in the midst of it with an iron sword in hand, which he twirled expertly to slay opponent after opponent. A comrade of his fought near him, slaughtering the assailants with equal efficiency. Still, more continued to enter the fray, until Charles and his partner were surrounded.

“Good luck,” Charles said, raising his blade in anticipation of a charge.

Then, an agonizing pain blossomed in his chest. Charles felt his legs weaken and then fail, and he collapsed with a dull thud. His vision blurred, but he could still see his own blood mixing with dirt on the ground.

“Sorry, Charles,” said his comrade, withdrawing the rapier from Charles’ back. Darkness enclosed Charles, and gradually the sounds of melee faded away.

He was back in the white room.

“Far too cliché…” he said, shaking his head.

His quill vibrated gently, drawing his attention. It began to rise into the air, making a low humming noise. It slowly rotated, until the sharp tip faced Charles.

“The quill betrays the author,” said Charles breathlessly. The quill shot forward, burying itself deep into Charles’ neck. Blood erupted from his mouth, spilling onto the floor and parchment. In desperation, he seized the quill and pulled it from his neck.

All noise ceased.

Charles dipped the bloodied quill into the ink, and began to write.

05-Jun-2011 21:09:35

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