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Venmi

Venmi

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I will write an entry, but I may need an extra day because I just found out I could enter this on a weekend that I have no time to write, and I need to finish a project for tomorrow. I won't have time to write a quality entry on top of all that. If that is all right, please let me know.

12-Jun-2011 12:18:43

Borna Coric

Borna Coric

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What I'll do, Xan, is add you to the contestants list so you're at least in the contest, and then even if you don't write an entry you have a chance at getting to the next round. Though if you can write something it'll be preferable, don't worry yourself too much.

12-Jun-2011 12:44:40

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The hooded figure slipped from shadow to shadow, only being drenched in light for a few seconds at a time. He rounded the corner into the courtyard, only to be met by glares from several guards. He cursed under his breath and stepped out of view.
‘How could I have been so stupid?!’ He was furious with himself. He set off through the shadows to look for an alternative entrance. As he entered the Queen’s garden to the side of the palace, he heard voices so he had to quickly crouch down in a nearby bush, squashing some rather pleasant-looking roses. Getting inside would be harder than he had hoped. He heard the voices fade away into the night. He picked himself up, brushed the soil off his tunic and slid along the wall towards the kitchen door. When he got there, the door was ajar. Peering in, he could see that no one was around. Excellent. He slid out of his boots so as not to scatter mud over the floor and put his bare feet on the cold stone. The fire in the stove was still burning, the light glinting off the large holy symbol on his chest. He quietly opened the door leading to the dining hall and let out a sigh of relief when he saw that it too was empty.

12-Jun-2011 22:31:21

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‘One more room...’ He said to himself. He passed the large mahogany table in the centre of the room, reaching the door on the other side. He crouched down and looked through the gap between the wood and the floor. King Roald, alone in his study. He stood up and knocked. Bewildered, the king opened the door.
‘Do you know what hour thi-‘ Before he could finish, a Runite dagger was rammed into his chest. He stumbled backwards and collapsed. Dead.
Dawn came as a surprise to the hooded figure. The sunlight spilled onto the carpet and illuminated the room. He was observing the king when there was a loud knock at the door. He hastily shoved the body under the desk and hid it from view with a chair. He pulled off his hood and opened the door.
‘You’re in early, old chap!’ Captain Rovin boomed, ‘I need a word with the king.’
‘I’m afraid he’s...busy.’
‘Shame. Well I’ll be on my way. Do tell him I dropped by.’ Rovin left and shut the door behind him.
Aeonisig Raispher sat down and thought of he must do next.

12-Jun-2011 22:31:38

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Terribly sorry it's so short... Got it into my head that the limit was 2, 000 characters xD Well, hope you enjoyed. I was hard-pressed for time, so the quality of this is not as good as I'd have liked it to be, but I can't want for the next round! :D

12-Jun-2011 22:37:42

WintryElf

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As good as I could make it. Ta-da, I slip in just before the deadline!

BETRAYAL
Wintry Elf

Screams.

The screams of the dying.

Raelyn started, a bead of cold sweat tracing a path down his temple as a choked sob escaped his lips. The haze of sleep blurred his vision as he panted loudly, his raw throat aching in complaint. The first thing that met his gaze was the empty bed opposite his.

“Be good, Rae.”

He swung his feet out of bed. An acrid scent reached his nose as he rose to his feet, which he dismissed.

"Don't touch this, Rae. It’s only for men.”

His fingers twitched as he remembered the feel of the cool metal box on his skin. It was the feel of the forbidden fruit, that which only the men could possess. He was a man now, wasn't he.

“I’ll show you how it works.”

Warmth. Heat. The flames erupting from the pile of wood. The crisp snaps and crackles as it settled into a merry blaze.

The desire for manhood itself. The desire to create such art from tinder and sticks.

“Want to learn how to use it? I can teach you,” said the father, gathering his things together in a bag.

“Yes, Father!” A delighted grin. Rambunctious pitter-patters on the floor as a smaller bag was snatched from beneath a child’s bed.

“Wait here. I’ll be right back.”

“I promise.”

Why did you go?

Why would you go to that woman? Before Mother left, she hated her. I did*’t know why.

But you weren’t supposed to see her.

You were being bad, weren’t you. Well, here’s a secret. I was bad too.

A smile crept to the boy’s lips as his ploy came into sharp focus in his mind.

Night. The house. A cancelled trip.

Her rumpled skirts in his lap as his laugh rumbled through the silence.

13-Jun-2011 12:32:39 - Last edited on 13-Jun-2011 12:37:28 by WintryElf

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“Go and hunt. Take my dagger,” urged the man.

“Yes, Father.” The sound of acquiescence. Rasps were heard, and a door was shut. The man laid back his head, allowing the woman to continue her advances.

Muffled footsteps on the floor went unheard.

Unlike the old man’s screams as a dagger slipped between his ribs.

The woman screeched. She would have to go, too.

A malicious grin spread across the child’s face. Black hands. A smudged face.

The body. A great smoky blaze.

Then the laughter came.

The laughter of freedom, of being unbound by petty rules.

It continued well into his sentencing.

Raelyn twitched, aroused from his reverie by a much more pungent acrid stench.

It couldn’t be her, could it. After all, she wasn’t fit to burn with Father. She was thrown out.

He spread the curtains, and the cool steel of solid bars met his gaze.

The smile faltered.

A sprint to the door.

The hammering on the barred entrance. The cries for help unheard.

The fire closed in on him. Its bright, dancing tendrils seemed to shudder with anticipation.

“As the price of your murders, you will burn at sunset.”

“Father, help me!”

A skull. Charred black. Cradled in his arms. The remnants of a forgotten promise.

Screams.

The screams of the dying.


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I hope this made sense. Written when it was, it probably isn't as perfect as I could make it, but I'm down to the last few minutes here.

Good luck, everyone.

13-Jun-2011 12:36:07

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