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Bonx

Bonx

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Gaurdian. You owe me 1.3m still... i do think, and you would probably agree, this has been more than enough time for you to get 1.3m back to me. Have you deleted me off your friends list and hoped i would forget about you? I kinda need that 1.3m, I'm gearing up for fight caves again and it would help me greatly.

Now to comment on the story. 4/5 i reckon.

30-Nov-2007 06:26:31 - Last edited on 30-Nov-2007 09:52:33 by Bonx

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Mate, quite a nice prologue you got there :) Two posts, but intriguing and interesting...I think that this frightful pirate who had raided cities laid waste to fleets etc. etc. shouldn't die because he tripped, though :| Overpowered by dozens of soldiers, ship sunk and he sunk with it or something, but not trip and hit his head...

EDIT: Knew I forgot something. It seems this great treasure was ALL on the Pyro when it sunk? Treasure that could make the gods envious and turn the most selfless man mad with greed doesn't quite sound like it could fit on a single ship, d'you think?

And you gave Smurf's story 2/10?? What story and why?? O_o


Also: write. I'm not saying this because I'm hooked and need more, I'm far from that. I'm saying this because you have TWO POSTS of story for 7 pages of thread. You've got plenty of readers, now it's more about whether you write or not that keeps us ;)

-~* The Icelandic Grim Reaper is here *~-

30-Nov-2007 22:26:06 - Last edited on 30-Nov-2007 23:26:19 by [#80N8R0VWZ]

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Slay Orc 681

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I apologize for taking so long to add more posts. I've had about ten pounds of homework this week, I reckon. Not too fun. New posts either around 10:00 (Arizona time) tonight, or if something gets in the way then tomorrow morning.

Edit: Also, Mimic, I'm sorry. I thought I had already paid you back. >.< I had not removed you, I just haven't gotten on in game in several months. If we can arrange a time to get on, then I will pay you back.

30-Nov-2007 23:35:12 - Last edited on 30-Nov-2007 23:36:14 by Slay Orc 681

Slay Orc 681

Slay Orc 681

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Also, Siggi, I never mentioned the size of the treasure. For all you know, it could be the size of a marble. ;)

As for the 2/10, it was a review. (A written review, but I always included a x/10 for the end for the writer). I gave the 2.5/10 to Murky Hell.

30-Nov-2007 23:41:41 - Last edited on 30-Nov-2007 23:43:01 by Slay Orc 681

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